wow this is a great story keep up the great work

Great chapter love it. So im going to guess that you are going to do the ff7 story line with Nocits? Or will you be doing something else?

Emo 1 and Emo 2 can't seem to get along. Who knew? Keep up the good work

That was a good fight scene. But must be really tiring for Noct. Mommy Tifa is also having a hard time with 2 spikey emo dudes getting on each other's nerves. Hahaha. Excited to read more of this.

Save Tifa, Noctis! Show some jaw dropping moves, your highness. Make Cloud jealous too along the way. Just kidding.

Keep this up! Glad that the number of your readers are growing. :)

And Prince Moneybags joins the fray. Dis gon b gud. :3

Nice. Looking forward to seeing Noct fight. Looking forward to more!

YES YES YES NOCTIS GETS TO FIGHT NOW

I've played both 15 and 7R and the difference is Gil is actually so funny. 7R kinda reflects how people are pressed for money because the rewards are small and yet the items are priced kinda high. Then you have 15 with so many hunts and high rewarding missions, it's just funny.

Hahahahha I like the banter with Noctis and Tifa

Hello? I like the story? This was a good start, I'm actually intrigued.

Oh my goodness! I love it! I haven't played the remake but based from videos I watched in YouTube, you included the visions the group get from the Whispers, right? I absolutely love Noctis' interaction with the group. I am curious how Aerith's power is similar to the Wall and if there is a possible connection. And finally, Noctis jumps into the fray! I'm ecstatic on how you will write Noct's fight scene. Stay safe and healthy, dear Author.

Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh mi noctifa hearth i love them so much, they're my favorite crack ship

Hey, I think you have a solid start to the story but the pacing seems all over the place. It doesn't have a consistent flow to it, imo. Your dialogue and characterizations are great though. Keep it up

Prince Moneybags. XD