| Reviews for A Future we Hope For |
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Syafiq chapter 4 . 7/18 Update soon pls |
shadowgear1004 chapter 4 . 6/22 that's a bit disturbing |
Skull Flame chapter 4 . 6/22 - A relationship between Romani and Ritsuka wasn't something I expected. I don't mind it, it's just... unusual to me. - The American Singularity draws ever closer. I wonder how you'll do it. |
BlueCore chapter 4 . 6/22 Finally a new update, can't wait for the next chapter. |
Skull Flame chapter 3 . 5/20 - So they have been eating wyvern meat all along. Funny detail. - Ritsuka expects to be betrayed? That's foreboding. - Are the Crypters gonna summon their own Servants? |
Thanos Cradik chapter 2 . 5/19 The idea of Found kicking Beryl's ass is highly amusing to me. |
Skull Flame chapter 2 . 5/10 - I think this is the first time I find this kind of story, where Team A's members don't turn into Crypters. And even Beryl grew fond of Ritsuka. Alright, this is promising. - I wonder if Wodime, after listening to Elizabeth's concert, would find her singing atrocious, or would he actually like it. - Ritsuka likes to crossdress? That's a first. A surprising detail, but not one that I mind. - Heheh, Fou knows why he attacked Beryl. Too bad it got him into trouble. - I wonder what Servants will Team A get. |
hnh058513 chapter 1 . 4/27 Funny that Beryl was interested in Arturia Alter when her Lion king incarnation hates him, and the witch who is infatuated with him may be a young morgan |
Unsettling-A.I.R chapter 2 . 4/20 Wonder what had Wodime spooked when good ol' Edmond decided to show up. Though I am a bit surprised that they didn't figure it was Dantès right off the bat, Wait and Hope is his catch phrase, kind of. Still, curious to see where this is going forward, but please do work a bit more on your narration, it still is kind of spotty, jumping from point to point with very rough transitions. Try reading Fragments of Chaldea, really good FGO story, gets its stuff down pat. Anyway, so long, till next time! |
Syafiq chapter 2 . 4/20 Like the story and how the other crypters are adapting and best senpai a team master is adorable dork. So far from what i remember regarding chinese servant Jingke and lubu were the only chinese servants summonable at the time im interested in what their reaction when they see hinako if they would recognise her as consort yu. Also i you doing this story based on time of the events that happen in the fgo franchise. Kinda imagine the others reaction if they went to the Fate kalleid illya event. |
DogBite chapter 2 . 4/18 Ah, that's a nice foreshadowing for the edgelord. This is going to be interesting with him. Excited for the next chapter! Fou knows whos the bad boi is. Stay frosty |
guiltyr2 chapter 1 . 4/18 I hope you can continue this, we need some wholesome/fluffy team A content without lostbelt bs |
Unsettling-A.I.R chapter 1 . 4/17 Very pleasant little piece so far! My own taste edges more towards chapters of greater length but if you update again I should be all good. Hope to see some more stuff from you, well done! Can't wait for the next chapter, though I would recommend trying to structure the narration and inner monologues a tad better if you can, just saying. |