| Reviews for The New Order of Revan |
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   darthkratos24 chapter 1 . 20h I'm not halfway through this chapter and I'm out already you've got potential but this story is rushed to hell no explanation to why he's here he just is and he's a dick to random people if you're going light side we know that's not true for him at all dark side him yea, I'd recommend in the future find pacing explain more rather then throwing shit together and hoping it clicks plan ahead others every chapter will be like this one two sentences of random stuff running into one screaming in agony as they try and make sense but suddenly you're onto the next scene like a HDHD kid hyped on sugar... calm down and actually explain your scene or all people will see is a guy that had a daydream once and spat it out like I said great promise poor quality. Keep writing and read a lot more fanfics to see what works for them and development your style. peace ️ |
| Belice chapter 2 . 7/5 A very promising story - I whish you 'll update this one day |
| Chunk127 chapter 2 . 6/15 update? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/6 Please let Maul, Dooku, and Grievous be recruited! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/1 This is very interesting! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/4 This is a great please continue it. It has so much potential and your writing is great |
| Araytigre chapter 2 . 4/30 It would appear that young Galen's Force Vision had a bit of a ripple effect, for it to pull in Shaak Ti too. The almost funny part is, is that the Mandalorians are chasing the wrong Marek. Hmmm... I wonder if the current Mandalore "Maul" is any relation to Darth Maul, probably not unless he is also a Zabrak, makes ya wonder thaough. Thank You. TTFN |
| Dillonga2 chapter 2 . 4/30 love it can't wit for the next chapter |
| MarsUltor45 chapter 2 . 4/30 Ah the butterfly effect. Such a wonderful thing. Keep up the great work! |
| Bolis67 chapter 2 . 4/29 Ok i am out, Its the whole 'i will tell you everything so you can trust me even my deepest darkest secret even you have not EARNED jack shit'. Secrets are EARNED no matter the circumstances. You want to tell it fine but disguise it, use double entendre it makes it MORE interesting. I get it its your fic but goodbye. |
| Firescout chapter 1 . 4/27 Can't wait till next chapter comes out |
| Araytigre chapter 1 . 4/20 This should prove interesting to say the least, and I highly doubt that it will be boring, lol. Thank You. TTFN |
| amazingkingxman chapter 1 . 4/19 It’s nice to have a Force Unleashed/Clone Wars time travel fic that doesn’t involve Galen losing his memories. |
| Dillonga2 chapter 1 . 4/17 love it can't wait for the next chapter. |
