*Sniff* I'm not crying *Sniff*

Really good!

Awww, friendship. :)
(Is it weird I kinda want something bad to happen, or one of them dies?)

Amberheart! Ripplepool! Ebonyflight! Yay, three new warriors! This was great, stay safe! :)

that was a great chapter! amberheart's warrior named suited her so well! honestly, I don't know why, but I love Duskpaw XD. and I spotted some ebonyxsmolder action too! they would be really cute together. great writing and looking forward for more!
~Poppy :)

wow this was a really great chapter. your descriptions were ~amazing~ and you should be super proud of what you’ve written. i can tell you are going to be an amazing author! the dialogue between the apprentices was great and, dang, Smolderpaw got wise XD. anyhoo good luck writing more!
~Poppy :)

I really like it just my the description

Nooo... he was shot wasn’t he... :( why did you do this to him. Well, aside from a sad death, good chapter, and the break was okay! Take all the time you need, I’ll always check this out whenever it’s updated, no matter how long it’s been! Stay safe! :)

wow that was... intense. I'm assuming the long sticks were guns? tawnystar's dialogue was really well written; it was clear that he was grieving. the descriptions were nice and yeah, it was a great chapter. thistlevine's death was pretty satisfying too. that sounds so morbid, but I swear it's not XD. Looking forward for more and good luck writing!
~Poppy :)

Why does tragedy happen all the time to Briarpaw?

Okay then, that was a lot. I’m glad Flickerflame and the kits are alright, and Twilegs are causing trouble...again. Great chapter, stay safe! :)

Oh my gosh this chapter was so intense, i was like literally on the edge of my seat! you did such an amazing job with this chapter i can’t wait for the next one

Those are some well trained dogs. Loved the chapter with all the dialogue. Excellent chapter, keep up the good work and stay safe! :)

Okay then. Sheep weren’t a problem in the original books, so this is exciting. But where there’s sheep, I suppose there would be dogs. I liked this a lot, keep up the good work and stay safe! :)

This chapter was so good and action packed, this is probably my favorite story as of right now!

Ahhhhhh! I was so sure someone was gonna die! Everyone’s okay... whew. Briarpaw! Tell Mossfoot when you get back! Anyway, I hope you enjoy your summer. And the cover is great, better than anything I could draw haha. Great chapter, stay safe! :)