HELLO?! I’ve only read the first chapter so far but I’m OBSESSED. This post-apocalyptic setting is really great, I appreciate how you’ve drawn on the more recent manga events and how gritty it all feels. You captured Yukio really well also— self-deprecating (even ar times self-loathing) but with absolutely ironclad willpower. And Rin! I’ve always enjoyed wondering how similar and different Rin is to his Demon King ‘brothers’, including his mortality or lack thereof. I’m thrilled you’ve brought that in and I can’t wait for what’s next!

and my review full of typos
I hope u understand it

I got criying all the way and what?! he is not Yukio?!
XD
and I'm a bit afraid if Rin is going to really died
And Rin is so sad too T.T

Okay firstly, I will say Oh this is Rin's part
I'm a bit confused in the beginning. I though Rin is searching for Rin the same time Yukio search him in ch 1 but I remember what Yukio search is not the person but the ash!

So ... where is the dream begin? from very beginning? too complicated to become a dream hehe (not dream, I mean a world after Rin's death but noylt death)

Yeah that's definiton of ghost in the canon
and I don't find typos

Thanks for writing

oh I forgot
the little girl with her brother
hmm such a lovely girl
and how funny she is threw flowers all over Rin!
And when she gave the ribbon too

Brilliant chapter again! Defo tugged my heart strings! Honestly I was so confused about how smooth Rin and Yukio’s meeting was. Found each other too easily, I was super sceptical but the way they danced around things before outright stating what happened and filling the blanks. Honestly I thought something was lacking when Yukio encouraged Rin to go. There was a lot more between them that needed to be said so it’s great that it was Death instead! Two chapters. The both of them searching through long, winding paths and we finally get to see them reunited next chapter T-T crying all ready.

This was truly an amazing story. Thank you op for giving us this wonderful experience. 3

* A

The characterisation is A Honestly it’s super realistic, love the subtle mentions of character growth in Bon, Izumo and even Shima’s change. Defo cannot wait to see what you’ll be doing with the whole shiemi/Shemihaza thing. I felt Lucifer’s frustration when it came to Satans protection lmfaoI love that the years have been so much Yukio hardly has any remembrance of simple things like Bons maturity. I wonder where Mephisto and Amaimon went off to lmfao. There’s so many things I want to gush about this chapter! Ending was an amazing teaser. I’m looking forward to what will be next whenever you update! Stay safe out there!

eventhough there is Rin in the character list, Rin just... came in the very end
thus can I said I want more? XD

okay
I got the spoiler everywhere, cause the new fanfics are always based on manga
and I havent read them at all, just few chapters maybe

well that's good work
and I love it more cause it's long~ 23k words, yes?
That's why thank you for writing this

God I love your stories!
That ending was just brilliant, I kind of want more lol.