Hey writer, I was just wondering if himiko will really be a hero along with the OC, and not a bad girl cus that wouldn't go well for both of them too pals.
Sincerely yours, Mr. P.

It is amazing how you're somehow making Overhaul even more messed up as a character than he was in canon. Overhauling Keita was one thing, that seemed pretty in-character from what we know of canon, but putting other people's Quirks in him almost like he's trying to replicate All For One's power is messed up and a pretty awesome plot development. He actually comes pretty close to being a realistic psychopath with the addition of his little brother, having the boldness to attack U.A. head-on, a distinct lack of empathy towards Keita's feelings, and is openly using their bond as brothers to try and manipulate him. He's a pretty awesome villain for the story.

On a more positive note, it was very nice to see Keita and Katsuki get together. A really sweet scene to end a pretty intense arc.

Glad that Keita managed to give his brother a run for his money, even getting a little back up from Tomura. Got to say I wasn't expecting that, though when he tried to get him to join the League of Villains, that I definitely saw coming.

Though, now we get more insight on what Overhaul really did to Keita, he actually experimented on him and put other people's quirks inside of him. Wonder what else he has in his arsenal and how is he going to unlock them. Also, given what's known about One For All now in the Canon, he and Izuku have something in common. They both have quirks that hidden within them and they are going to have to learn how to control and master them.

At the end of the day the villains retreated and the heroes were victorious, though Keita is left conflicted on how he's suppose to feel knowing the truth about what his brother has done. He's going to have a lot of thinking to do. At least he now has someone to be with now. He and Katsuki have gotten together and now he's going to have to figure out what he's going to tell the rest of his class mates.

For the kill la kill idea I suggested how about having the oc also have a Kamui and the oc transformed state leaves him pretty much shirtless think like Gray in fairy tail when he strips this is another reason oc has a stripping habit

Wow, this was definitely an emotional chapter.

Now we finally get more info on what Kai has done to Keita. This is just unbelievable, how could Kai do something like that to his own brother, the person he is suppose to protect and look after.

Well, Keita stood strong, he faced his fears and fought his brother t o basically a stalemate.

And, Mirio showed up to protect Keita from Kai again, like a real brother would. Guess they both are going to be training even harder to be ready for their next encounter with Chisaki.

Tomura even teaming up with Keita to fight against Kai was a bit of a surprise, though I knew he would try and get Keita to join the League of Villains.

I loved the talk that Keita and Katsuki had and now she finally knows the whole truth of what Keita has been through and now she's become his girlfriend. Guess now that's one more thing off his bucket list.

Can you add Mina Ashido, Toru Hagakure, Kinoko Komori and Labrava to the harem

Alright that’s the first season done, onto the next arc! Was the person that was stalking Keita revealed? I might have missed it. Really good chapter!

Wow damn this chapter is heavy with emotion I'm really looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here

Excellent update

With the kill la kill oc idea a running joke is the oc bringing up how sexy ryukos body is much to her irritation and happiness and the oc is apart of the nudist beach organisation tho he isn't really devoted to the nudity thing tho his time spent with aikuro mikisugi has given the oc a stripping habit which he absolutely hates in fact his first meeting with ryuko oc was shirtless without realising it and oc uses science to win his fights his main weapon is a gun blade

For a future fanfiction you should try kill la kill and have the oc be paired with both ryuko and Satsuki

if kenji and keita were in the same versión, what kind of relationship would they have?

So your poll is a tough one some great concepts there if I could vote I’d go Avatar or the Uchiha rewrite, the Wood realease Oc or Akeno’s sibling that’s with Serafall but I hope Uchiha or Avatar take the cake

By the way are they all harems because that would be great

Looks like I put all these points in the wrong story reviews haha

Okay here we go

Avatar wise

You’ve really put me at ease by saying the Oc is going to have his own view of things and thus his own path and all that

Glad you like the idea of his initial team or as hopefully Azula will call them harem sisters haha

DxD wise

Now maybe odd things but can the Oc brother of Akeno have long hair like her but have his tied up in a single braid and if he does look like Akeno can he be described as being as handsome as she is beautiful so he’s very handsome haha

Also hope his battle gear has a slight resemblance to his fathers

Naruto wise

Glad you like the idea of Sakura getting her own personal slug and implying she won’t be as to but it bluntly useless as canon Sakura was in part 1 I'm guessing the Oc hopefully being the top student in the class by a wide margin actually inspired the likes of Sakura and Ino to be better ninja

Glad Haku and Zabuza have a decent chance of surviving and turning up at things like the Kage summit as Mei’s guards

For the Wood style Oc assuming again he’s a Senju will he be Hashirama’s grandson or will he be Tobirama’s grandson either way he’s the cousin of Tsunade and I kinda hope you go with him being Tobirama’s grandson but of course he’d have a more relaxed nature than Tobirama haha also means he can get cool silver hair haha

Hope you change your mind on the Wood style user not being paired with Tsunade

Now about the Mangekyou Sharingan of the Oc

Fair enough on not wanting to give him Amaterasu

Haha think you might be thinking to small scale if you’d have him use Kotoamatsukami to redirect only one attack he should definitely use it like the second way you put forward with him turning his enemies against each other

Also hope you remove that deal of only being able to use Kotoamatsukami once a decade but maybe that limit was because it was implanted in a crow and yeah if paired with Tsukuyomi he’d have the two best Genjustu’s right their so he could really screw with his foes without doing much

But also glad you liked the idea of him having the short range Kamui plus it would really remove a lot of the lee way Obito enjoyed I can picture the Tobi persona dodging a lot of attacks then the Oc who’s seen this attacks him and uses Kamui at the same time and lands a big attack on Obito shocking him

Still when it comes to a power that will let him teleport seeing him use Kaguya’s portals would be awesome

Yeah I’m a big fan of the powers Kaguya showed off haha

Oh and glad you liked the idea of the Ocs Susanoo getting to use that drill Lance Shisui’s had I can’t help but picture his Susanoo in its armoured or humanoid form sprouting two extra arms at one point and it has a weapon in each hand so the drill Lance in one hand, the Yata mirror shield in another, the sword of Totsuka in another and in the final hand he has Hm maybe a axe or kanabo

Also the weapons colours would change to match the colour of whatever the Ocs Susanoo colour is which speaking of what colours are you leaning to I know I said white before but I’m curious haha

Good stuff