| Reviews for The Tale of Dekiru |
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beingLazy chapter 3 . 4h just realized there are only 3 infinite dendrogram fics |
BoredKing chapter 3 . 7/19 Thank you, finally someone who sees Bakugo for the tool he is. I can't understand how people like him. You know you don't have to explain everything that happened in the chapter in your AN. People aren't that dum... nevermind, continue as you were. |
Guest 123 chapter 3 . 7/17 While I really liked the original version of this story, I have to agree with a lot of the other reviewers that this redone version and the inclusion of level-headed Eshgi (sorry if I butcher her name) reads SO much better. I honestly hope you are happy with this new version, and continue to keep working on this amazing story. Also, is it weird to think that Dekiru will end up collecting “failed” creations of Franken due to his big heart, and Munchin the heck out of them with his Quirk-Analysis mindset to make this insanely good utility/support/combat pets? Just me? Oh well... haha. |
BoredKing chapter 1 . 7/19 Interesting but that ending felt like spoilers. |
djinn chapter 3 . 7/17 cool rewrite, good luck in future updates. |
Tamamo-chan chapter 1 . 7/17 Whoever said that Ishtar and Ereshkigal are the same person in FateGo cleary never played the damn thing and needs to have their head checked, i mean just ecause the like to possess two versions of the same girl... with Ishtar going for Fate/Stay Night Rin and Ereshkigal going for MoonCell Rin |
middernacht chapter 3 . 7/17 love it please continue |
A Fan chapter 1 . 7/16 Great stuff, I can't wait to see how this goes! Also, I agree with another reviewer, you should totally add Ishtar all things considered. Below is a rant about why a lot of people don't like ID, I don't disagree with you at all, infact I agreen almost 100% on how awesome the series is. While I love the series as well, I can understand why people don't like it. When people look for isekai, they look for either a shitty shocking world(Goblin Slayer and all those other ones that make you grateful to be able to live in modern times) or something they can self-insert themselves into the MC's place(OP MC anyone, or just straight relatable MC's like Bone Daddy, Tanya etc... I am a salaryman as well afterall, I thank my parents I wasn't born Japanese). Not something that simply has game elements like this series. I've been a long time fan since I saw the first few chapters of the novel get translated when I was on novelupdates. A lot of people say it's boring, but I CAN see where they are coming from. There is no real tension and it's got an almost slice of life feel aside from the occasional serious situations. But man, the first few chapters/episodes certainly don't do a good job of roping someone's attention in. I mean it's more gag-like than anything. His friend is a literal walking and talking joke, they kill some bug monsters, gets a Waifu as a weapon, Waifu complains about being used to kill gross monsters like Zombies(totally understandable by the way... We), etc. That's pretty much the intro, and it's why a lot of people don't like it. It's like Only Sense Online, Shield Girl, LMS, Ark, etc where they are actually just inside a game with no "big bad plot" looking over them(Well Ark and LMS do actually have some over-arching plot, but they don't come into play until well over half way through the series lol). I like them, but it's not all that popular in comparison to the mainstream isekai trash... Sadly. Just my thoughts and opinions. Feel free to disagree. |
KischurZelretch von Schweinorg chapter 3 . 7/18 in general Canon Izuku had a worse childhood than its shown in the manga and anime. the reason for this is: ANIME AND MANGA ONLY SHOW A LITTLE PART OF THE MCs LIFE! a few flashbacks cant compare to years of living in abuse and bullying, borderline torture. also good chapter, but i really hope that a new chapter for event horizon comes out fast. its been one and a half mounth since the last one... |
Dusk and Fall chapter 3 . 7/18 oh lawd this is even more than I expected! two Cinnamon rolls as partners? Yes please! Well I hope you are doing well, and keep up the good work! love the chapter honestly, especially the last quarter of the chapter, made a grown man tear up... |
Roop Vishal Bathala chapter 3 . 7/18 Growing up in India, bullying was nonexistent in my school and college, so I can't relate with the huge amount of bullying and abuse shown in anime and english movies and serials, but the problems faced by the quirkless in mha are not shown because of the shounen demographic and reality is overlooked for power of friendship, so we can safely say that after all the anime layers are pulled away, the reality is much more terrible and izuku had lived a downright horrible life and he survived due to his sheer will and determination, hope he makes tons of friends in dendrogram and overcome his trust issues. Apart from that, is there any limit for number of tamed monsters in a party, and I hope he tames some oneesan type elementals or something, because I don't know the type of monsters usually available in dendrogram. And regarding the onmyouji job, in many animes and shows, it is similar to daoshi, in that they use talismans to create different magical effects and barriers and employ spiritual entities as familiars, so in broad terms we can say that onmyouji is the Japanese version of daoshi. Hope my rant helps you. |
dragon-cloud16 chapter 3 . 7/17 On My God! This is actually such a improvement of your previous take on this. I just idea of the kind and loving Ereshkigal is standing by his side now and this will actually make him the opposite of Tsukuyo with his maiden usage. And it is actually funny how he beat Behemot and her reaction. Not very endearing to see Franklin acting like she\he is to him. She might be a little jealous of Eresh being close to Izuku but that can be explained as being worried for family. And now Leviathan is going to be looking out for Izuku as a for her to fight. A great rework and I am looking forward to seeing what happens next. Especially with the upcoming UBM fight and Izuku getting a dragon as a companion. And remind Ereshkigal to protect Izuku and don't lead the Shota. Don't let others lead the Shota. And treating him good is encouraged but DON'T LEWD THE SHOTA! At least without his permission. By the way I bet good many that many Masters would give up everything to permanently live in Infinite Dendrogram. |
DRaG0Ns chapter 3 . 7/17 I love this new version with eresh. The old version was also good, but this one seems to flow much better. It also seems to have slowed down a tad. |
doctor3027 chapter 3 . 7/17 In my opinion this is better than the old one. I can't wait to see how things go on from here. I can't wait to see what kind of monster Franklin will make for Dekiru. |
syneb chapter 3 . 7/17 Ereshkigal definitely fits Izuku more than Ishtar. If you decide to write about Izukus studies please don't make him focus on support gear, it will feel like he backtracked on his little realization since he'd STILL be focusing on heroes when he could be helping much more by trying to advance technology or medicine (or both, I definitely could see him doing that with his determination to help others). That's not to say he couldn't work on support items, but it really shouldn't be his main focus. |