| Reviews for Return of the Father |
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wadethewolf chapter 3 . 10/6 I just wanted to say I enjoy all your writing I've read all that you have posted here and it's been so good thank for all the hours of entertainment |
BunnyBear27 chapter 3 . 9/30 Wow! The way you ended it was ... Amazing! Totally burned him. Left him speechless. I really like Sassy Luke. They’re all like. Your married, have a kid, won’t let us kidnap him. Like duh. He doesn’t need them. He has risen to a new level. The part we’re he’s like 20 years and I only got A little over 3 months. Totally love it. I am seriously invested in this story. I know that this was only a fun plot in between updates on your other story but I do hope to read more of what happens to these awesome characters on this new plot twist. Thank you for sharing this story with everyone. It totally rocked. ️ |
ladybug chapter 3 . 9/29 So good! |
Lord Damon Darkfyre chapter 3 . 9/23 More? Please? |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/21 Best star wars story you have |
hunter81095 chapter 3 . 9/11 Oooh, Luke is not a happy man. Not a happy man at all. He probably needs actual closure from Old Ben and Yoda, perhaps something along the lines of "We made a mistake, but we had our reasons, we couldn't teach you from childhood because it would alert Vader long before you were ready to face him." But that probably wouldn't work. Of course, considering Luke can see the good in Vader of all people, and in the EU he married the Emperor's personal assassin, perhaps he just needs a moment to calm down. I really want him to pull "What I told you was true, from a certain point of view" on Obi-Wan at some point. It would be hilarious. |
tpowe15 chapter 3 . 9/4 Please continue this! |
pottersparky chapter 3 . 8/19 I love it! It shame that you have not did another chapter in it for months. I love to see more this because so amazing not want to read more of it. Luke is already changing things like move to Coruscant and being father to Anakin. I like to see if Anakin will still make C PO? I like to know if Luke get meet friend Chew again? Will Luke tell his son about past when he is way older like 18? Will Anakin have a brother or sister in future? I want you know honor to read this and please write more of it when find time. Please it to good not do anymore of it. Hope my review please you as much as your story has please me. Thank you! |
MPPC chapter 3 . 8/18 Adore this. So. Much. |
tenchi chapter 3 . 8/15 Love it! You have done amazing job in making this. I feel that this story that must have new chapters. I love see new friends Luke make and changes that are made in past with him there. I think be cool if Luke gets job being Padme's pilot captain in phantom menace and Luke teaching his son the ways of force but staying away from jedi and sith but becoming a grey jedi. I love how put fear in Yoda by talking like him when never said word to him. Yoda be really careful messing with Luke and family in future if knows what good for him. Another good thing in this story is that no one thinks anakin is the chosen one with having two parents. I just hope you do not forget this story and do more chapters soon it to wonderful not to. I find be amazing tresure read. Thank you! |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/11 This is some good stuff you have right here |
LordDespoiler chapter 3 . 8/7 Originally found your fics through laughing to london. Like them all, but this is my favorite. Hope it continues :) |
sapphermine chapter 3 . 7/25 your luke is awesome! i like how he’s still the same kind, gentle, hopeful luke despite feeling empty after the war. i like how capable he is! but i do hope he finds another character he can rely on or who helps him other than shmi. i wanna see the relationships luke will build and how he’d be as a father. i hope you continue with this story! |
Shifuru chapter 3 . 7/24 Dang, this story is just so satisfying. Good read. |
Thumper1776 chapter 3 . 7/15 damn good start. |