Reviews for Carth Onasi, Ace Detective
AzureTemplar3535 chapter 16 . 4h
I thought the High Republic stuff doesn't come out to next year ?

I have a feeling that the entire High Republic is all going to be cancel. With all the rumors of them using time stuff to retcon the sequels and all of Kennedy's stuff. I don't see it going to be anyhting important.

About the rumors check out DVD overlord on youtube
inphernalmenace chapter 16 . 8/1
HK is about to have some fun killing people in "self defense". Very eager self defense. Which is warranted because Czerka will definitely be sending assassins after them. Coruscant is a cesspool of scum and villainy and there is no shortage of deserving targets for HK.
noloyolo chapter 15 . 7/30
Love the latest chapters, the drama is super fun :)
AzureTemplar3535 chapter 15 . 7/29
I did love the talk between Grenn and Aluyard, I will have to agree with Aluyard one planet can't stand up to the entire galaxy.

Even if somehow Telos survive, the galaxy is heading to another dark age and it wouldn't be pretty
inphernalmenace chapter 15 . 7/28
There is no one more terrifying that a truly just man. Aluyard hit a stone wall, but he is correct in that one planet cannot stand up against the galaxy. Should nothing else happen, Telos won't be in for a good time. However, if more came out, there is a chance others will join in. Now it depends on Revan's investigation.
AzureTemplar3535 chapter 14 . 7/25
Excellent Chapter, Revan's plan why is the oldest in the book worked perfectly.

The reason why Draay turned to the darkside was unique and completely "reasonable" for a Jedi to do is he or she went full tyrant lightside. Norman Carr from SWTOR comes to mind.

Revan interrogating the bridge crew was good, it shows why an average person would along with it with being pure evil.

Having the reason this was discovered and stop by one of the Jedi realizing that is go way over their head was surprising in a good way.
inphernalmenace chapter 14 . 7/24
Well it seems Lucian Draay isn't a mustache twirling villain, but rather someone who is delusional while believing that he is just. He really thought he as doing everything right and the police arresting him made him super confused.
inphernalmenace chapter 13 . 7/19
Well, everything looks like it will be coming together nicely. Revan will make it out just as Malak and the others will be arriving. With Kreia there, Draay will have to do some explaining.
AzureTemplar3535 chapter 12 . 7/15
A reasonable Artis, that's a new thing.
inphernalmenace chapter 12 . 7/13
The police are very competent, impressively so. The Jedi aren't quite so good at covering their tracks as they might think. Lucian Draay probably never imagined that someone would be able to counter his mind wipe tactics through the application of critical thinking to detect inconsistencies as well as having backups.
AzureTemplar3535 chapter 11 . 6/26
I did like the interrogation scene, it was fun watching Revan telling the truth and the other Jedi just ignoring him and the force too.

The reason I believe the Jedi didn't abused their power is very simple. If they scerwed up, even once the Republic could pull all of their funding. They're not really apart of the government, they're just a pseudo religious warrior monk order, that the goverment pays to handle problems cheaply.

Let said that interrogation scene was broadcast on the five O'clock Holo news. The Jedi order would have to go on record about the giant conspiracy that they believe Revan is behind. They would have to find evidence that could convicted Revan, if they don't they will looks lovely ke completely fools. Even worse since everyone believe they have special powers to know the truth, if they get evidence then people will start asking why are they paying for them.
inphernalmenace chapter 11 . 6/24
Revan having the proper documents and authorization when speaking to the droid contrasts with how Draay acts above the law. Well, technically Draay is within the law, but it is a law that allows him to be unaccountable
AzureTemplar3535 chapter 10 . 6/4
Grenn you did nothing wrong, you just in a middle of a conspiracy.
inphernalmenace chapter 10 . 6/4
Getting lost in that asteroid field was probably the best thing to happen to Carth. Since Lucian thinks Carth is dead, there wont be anyone going after him to tie up those loose ends. And if Carth comes back and finds out everyone has mysteriously forgot about the case, then the alarm bells will be ringing.
AzureTemplar3535 chapter 9 . 5/18
Love the ESB joke
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