What an awesometacular ending! The part where our heroes and the kids reunite was so cute! The way Winry tickled them! But what will become of Natalia and Voltaire? I also loved how you put songs from Brotherhood in this chapter. P.S.: The Lightning has a habit of calling Ed "boy" and Winry "girl", despite the latters being young adults, though I still like to call them teens. With that being said, tootle-loo!

It was funny how Roy nearly cheated on Riza! Can't wait to see Edward and the others kill the Blood with Thunder's help! P.S.: I've decided not to have She-Lightning, Lightna or Piggy around The Lightning when he's being pure evil. Only Skull is around when his big brother does heinous things because they're both pure evil. With that being said, tootles!

You make Xing look so big! Amazing! Also, the positions of the Philosophers of the north, south, east and west remind me of the positions of the Witches of the north, south, east and west from the Wizard of Oz! Except it's about alchemists instead of witches and their intentions are different. Can't wait to see Thunder turn on her dad btw! P.S.: I also got the idea for the Sweet Nightmares episode from Dr. Destiny invading the dreams of Superman, Batman, Flash, Green Lantern, Martian Manhunter and Hawkgirl in the Justice League! With that being said, tootles!

It was noble of Roy to choose death. And it was funny when Edward got angry when Alphonse's kung pao shrimp order reminded him of being short! Also, I loved the reference to Roy's miniskirt policy from the 2003 series! P.S.: At the end of the FMA Unlimited promo, The Lightning can be heard laughing. Apart from that, happy 4th of July!

It's good to know the kids are back to their normal selves! But I hope Olivier and Miles will be alright. I also read Dr. Carson's dialogue in the purple fish doctor's voice from SpongeBob SquarePants! P.S.: The Lightning's secret code to open stuff in his ship like prison cells is 51938, a reference to the debut of the 1938 Fighting Devil Dogs serial, where I got The Lightning character from. Another thing, ever since The Lightning framed Van Hohenheim for the murder and rape of Jane Juliet, Van has been haunted by The Lightning's laugh ever since then, partially the reason he cried in the family photo with his family when Ed and Al were kids. With that being said, tootles!

Wow! This does remind me of my FMA Unlimited Demon Babysitter episode! except the Blood succeeds while The Lightning failed and Blood intended to brainwash them instead of kill them. P.S.: As of Reborn after defeating Father, Edward has sometime made public appearances, where people, especially kids dressed like him and love struck women, cheer for him while marching bands play drum music with other spectators holding balloons shaped like his head and red balloons with his jacket's insignia on it. He is also a big Halloween item as well as an icon. With that being said, tootles!

I hope Maes isn't working for the Blood! That'd be awful, or is he planning something against him instead? I also loved how you gave Blood a human disguise! It reminds me of The Lightning's human disguise, and it looks like Steven did a pretty good job around the farm! P.S.: Derek Powers/Blight and Lino Jackson have the same voice actor while The Lightning, despite being the same character, has a different voice actor. P.S.S.: Dr. Lagart also helped Edward and the others expose Lino Jackson as The Lightning! But Lagart is still a villain as he only helped Edward to get back at The Lightning for gruesomely punishing him for his failures. With that being said, tootles!

Short but great chapter! I like how Maes Hughes lives and the reference you made on how overprotective he is with Elicia! I wonder how old she is now, a teen? I also read Steven's dialogue in Kevin Conroy's Bruce Wayne voice! With that being said, ciao!

Looks like Ed and the others inherited a Power Ranger team-vibe! Sorry this review took so long! I also read Lady Hound's dialogue in Cree Summer's voice! And The Blood's broadcast reminds me of The Lightning's broadcast! Another thing, when Edward said Izumi was going to raise the kids, he didn't mean he was going to give them away until they got older did he? P.S.: I know Alalngar was Alulim's son in real life, I just wanted to correct myself on The Lightning's real birthdate so I can change it in FMA Unlimited's first episode. With that being said, ciao!

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I liked how you put a Powerpuff Girls reference in the ending! And the part where Blood creates a school trap for the Aaron, Trisha Jr. and Rosie reminds me of the school trap The Lightning made for Maes, Trisha Jr. and Rosie, except my version the trap was so The Lightning can kill them instead of brainwash them. P.S.: I based Sophia Friday on real-life journalist Katie Couric, and I also read Noggin's dialogue in Pee-Wee Herman's voice because Noggin sounded like a silly name! Also, what do you think of The Lightning's Elite L-Bots that can tear Father to shreds? Set that aside, ciao!

Now this chapter is starting to remind me both of the Joker robbing the Gotham Bank in The Dark Knight and episode 2 of FMA Unlimited! I'm wondering if Mikhail is really the Blood in disguise! And at first I thought Kill-Raven was a woman, since the name Raven reminds me of Raven from Teen Titans. Also, I can't wait how Skull Inquisitor gets punished for his failures! P.S.: The Lightning has a special division of L-Bots called the Elite L-Bots that can tear even Father to shreds! With that being said, asta luego!

What an amazing way to start an amazing chapter! I see you took inspiration from Pinako's death at the hands of The Lightning to use it as Pinako dying at the hands of The Blood! Can't wait for the next chapter by the way! I have a question though, what did Christine Mustang mean when she said she wasn't born with a portal and can't use alchemy? P.S.: You're not gonna delete this fanfic again or abandon it are you? I hope not. This is your best Fullmetal Alchemist AU fanfic yet! P.S.S.: The real reason why Future Maes Elric can't fight with Edward and the others to defeat powerful villains such as The Lightning's generals because every time he fights, he dies a little. Set that aside, tootles!