| Reviews for Quirkless |
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  Guest chapter 7 . 6/28 Okay I like this story but you need to fix chapter 6 and 7 it makes it hard to read. |
 RaudomGny chapter 7 . 6/30 Oof. The format is very weird. Please make it normal lmao |
| ndjjdjsujsj chapter 2 . 6/24 The fuck is going on? So much happens so fast |
| Sageofchaos chapter 6 . 6/11 hope to read more. |
| ThePhenoix11 chapter 1 . 6/5 What... I've reread this 3 times and can barely make sense of everything. You need to slow down everything's going miles a minute. |
| ProjectIceman chapter 3 . 5/3 They tested for a blood sample for a Quirk Factor. More than what the doctor did for them, only doing an x-ray lol Still no Quirk tho |
| ProjectIceman chapter 1 . 5/2 Not bad. A bit rough here and there, sometimes the grammar and punctuation are off, but an interesting story. Chi or Ki being something that anyone can learn with the proper training, and giving the user the ability to see what kind of Quirks people have, even if you're just reliving a memory. That kind of ability with the analytical mind of Izuku and his tech-savvyness, he will become a force to be reckoned with. BTW how old is Izuku here? Since the setting is one year after he was diagnosed, I guess he is around 5-6 years old. |
| NyaNyaKittyFace chapter 2 . 4/30 The idea for this story is good, it’s just the execution that you need to work on. You’re pacing is usually too fast, the character interactions need more work, and the way people talk is off as well. You need to make them sound like real people actually talking to one another. You also need to work on the way you describe scenes. Like the stare down between Izuku and Bakugo for example. Too many sentences to describe what could have been done with less than half as many. Lastly, you say names too much. |
| Dylan-A-Friend chapter 2 . 4/23 Nice! |
| Karlos1234ify chapter 2 . 4/21 So it begins |
| Karlos1234ify chapter 1 . 4/21 This has my attention |
| Wolfbane chapter 1 . 4/14 Great start. Now to explore the other powers mha has to offer that are not quirks |
| ShadowWerewolf375 chapter 1 . 4/15 Good story like the premise and I’m interested to see where this goes. If there’s one thing I can say regarding criticism, it’s you need to make sure your double checking your work. I see misspelling and some words and sentences tend to mess up the flow. Plus a few times you miss used a word, but other then that you did good and I can’t wait for more |
| Chaos HellLaser chapter 1 . 4/13 Strong Start! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
