Hooray we finally got it

I like watching I see so far...but please don't kill the scarf moki, I love him already.

Awesome! another chapter!
a little shorter than usual but hey, any update's better than no updates :3

Another cool beans chapter

Awesome story so far!

Great chapter! You are good at writing action scenes! Now Ori is quietly recalling his past life.
What do you think of SoulLink's ability? Will it be here?
As always, have a nice day! :)))

The atmosphere was tense, I was so worried about Ori. Well written chapter!

If Ori had met Sein, would they have recognized him?

This story is amazing, great use of language and the way you describe everything. Though I never want to criticize someone’s work, there are noticeable mistakes with your writing.

This is from my own personal opinion but everything is far too clumped together, as paragraphs can be very long. Especially when it come to dialogue, when a different character is speaking the dialogue is always in a separate paragraph.

Here is another issue as follows: ("Wow! Is that true Aria? Thats amazing!" Aria giggled.) Ori is the one talking but when it ends with ‘Aria giggled’ this can mislead the reader in thinking that Aria is the one talking. You could change it to for example ‘Ori shouted in astonishment, causing Aria to giggle.’

Now don’t get me wrong, I’m not saying this to be rude in anyway. I’m just giving you honest feedback which I hope helps you in the future. Any-who this story is awesome, please take your time in writing the chapters. Good luck and keep up the great work.

It is very exciting and interesting! I read without stopping!
You are a very talented writer! I'm really looking forward to new chapters.

Why didn't Ori tell anyone about his soul?
Or should he first remember who he was?

Thank you for interesting story :)

The story is pretty solid so far. I can't wait to see what happened next!

Was the giant owl Ku? (Just a guess)