This chapter was very enjoyable, especially with Geo pretty much roasting Luna. And next chapter will definitely be good with her finally meeting Omega-Xis, can't wait for it.

Lovely chapter and introspection, can't wait for more. Regarding the exchange, pretty funny but could need more work.

That little exchange was funny and honestly well deserved. The ending had me laughing.

The first chapter was really good. I’m looking forward to the next chapter!

That was a great start to this rewrite.

I remember your original MegaGirl story, was pleasantly surprised to see it updated and now to see it revamped.

Quite curious to see where you go in terms of education and socializing with Geovanna, love the name BTW. In the original games Geo stopped going in part because of not wanting to get close to anyone else and lose them like his father, if I recall correctly, didn't want to get hurt again. By making it so Geovanna is up to college and university level though, you kind of remove one of the biggest, or at least most obvious, way to get her to socialize with her age group.

The reason I mention that is because bonds, Brotherbands, and relationships were one of the big things the games and series tried to emphasize. Makes me wonder if you're cutting that out a bit or totally, and just focusing on Geo/Sonia pairing/relationship. Or if you got some work around or alternative planned.

Either way very nice first chapter, and I'll be keeping an eye out for the next!

The fanfiction is not bad, but ... make up your mind, in some parts you call them boy and in other girls, apart from teenage pusis and then girl?

Glad you came back on this, best of luck with all of your stories and stay safe. Hoping for several battles.

I'm so happy that you revived this story. I'm loving this version better than the old version. I can't wait to read more. Fem Geo and Sonia forever.

So already this rewrite is off to a great start. I am already getting excited for when you get to the other chapters, I know they're gonna be great.