Reviews for Guild Master
Loki921 chapter 2 . 6/29
Please update soon.
goldshqipe chapter 1 . 6/26
Love the dialogue you have between the Kyuubi and Naruto, most of the other story follow where Naruto doesn't respect the Kyuubi and Kyuubi is just like "Wow this human may be the one grandpa told us about" so it's pretty nice story

Hope you continue
goldshqipe chapter 2 . 6/26
Brruuuuh love this story, same with Justice League croosover you've done.
And I also love the Kyuubi and Naruto
Guest chapter 2 . 6/20
I hope you update this because so far it’s an amazing read
elemental wolf sage chapter 1 . 6/13
why cant naruto wear orange it's a stupid excuse you came up with naruto could just threaten to use the summoning jutsu to kill them both if kurama threatens to cut of the etherno and cant naruto just learn sage jutsu himself
Haldir639 chapter 2 . 6/1
So far so good. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
mastercheif1229 chapter 2 . 4/29
Good story so far! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
helrio uzugaku chapter 2 . 4/28
Been wondering when someone was gonna write a remake of this. I like the challenges you've laid out for Naruto to overcome. Little plot armor to fall back on aside from kyuubi but it was well explained, well defined and well USED. I'd like to see Naruto learn Sage mode at some point admittedly. Eternano's aren't Chakra, so the consequences of using sage mode shouldn't be as severe if he 'did it wrong, think you could pull something like that off? Maybe have Naruto peek in on Karama while he is gathering the energy and figure it out for himself from there?

If your looking for arcs to fill up the 7 hear gap I've got a few ideas to use the surviving enemies of Fairytale's past battles to test and tenper Naruto during the course of 7 years.
PraetorXyn chapter 2 . 4/26
Interesting start here. Not really enough to hook me yet, but if this is a harem story I'm in.

The premise is interesting, but I don't like Naruto not being able to use magic without Kurama's help; maybe using magic with Kurama's help starts him with a small "magical core" As it were, and with clone spam he can get it up to a powerful size in short order.

I'm also not a big fan of when he came to Earthlamd; most of the NarutoFairy Tail crossovers I've read he came at the end of the story so he's absurdly OP by Earthlamd standards, which I've grown to like. Here, he is incredibly weak and probably doesn't even know clone spam is a thing. I hope this is rectified soon, as I've already watched the story where Natsu struggles through everything and gets some power of friendship temporary power up every boss fight; I don't want to see Naruto struggle through all the same stuff on his place.
hellfire45 chapter 2 . 4/21
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next
FireknightPrince chapter 2 . 4/18
Really like this so far will Naruto be using both Magic and Chakra or will it just be Magic? So far love the story.
luciano chapter 2 . 4/17
buen cap
T-B-R chapter 2 . 4/15
not that he knows it but he could probably have his dad(If he ever meets him in the seal)teach himto make the hiriashin marker and connect to one of his old kunai, still very interested where this goes, pretty good so far.
Holy rasengan chapter 2 . 4/14
good story i wonder what magic he gonna have
redlox2 chapter 2 . 4/14
was that brown haired girl Cana or just a random girl who lived in Magnolia Town? so far interested.
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