it is a good concept so far, but it is easy to tell this is an amateur's work, which is great! I hope someday when you've written more stories you come back and re-write this one. Until then, imma keep reading this

It’s a good story and to me it’s awesome though I do understand your reasoning on remake leave this one up cause damn it keeps me on the edge of my seat

Shouldn't he have yin necklace seeing as yangbody and yinmind?

I look forward to the rewrite of this story I wondered why you choose Kanto region when none of the Pokémon he caught was from that region will he be having just dark types in this new version or two of each type since the mind arts trio are ghost, psychic and dark

I like this story and I wonder will his reaction to Ash be the same because honestly that was my favorite part. Will you be deleting this and having your story replace this or are you doing a total rewrite and leaving this up? Oh I like this and am so curious as to how you are going to have the new one going while at the same time hoping that you do not change too much as again this was a great story to begin with.

games show 4 but anime often shows more so i wud say more as the game only limits to 4 due to programming

Nooooo whyyyyyyyy I enjoyed this story was hoping down the road he get a dark legendary or a pseudo legendary

Ouch. I can see where you're coming from. I'm excited for the rewrite. Kinda hoping that you would keep the battle bond greninja though. I haven't seen any of those, so I got super interested in your story when it had one.

I don't mind it just need you to tell me when the new story is up.

Owww, and here I was hoping for a new chapter ;c, it's fine ;), just take your time to write it so you enjoy what you create, can't wait to see how are you going to rewrite this tho, and hopefully it was fluffyness, we need fluffyness dammnit!,

Be careful and take care!

Whatever you feel passionate, about I support you. I'll be waiting to read your rewrite but don't feel too pressured to release it until you feel that it is something that you are proud of.

Although you are right that you did something wrong and early, but some things I need to tell you first, do not make it so distressing that was tedious ok, involve it in some fillers (that are of the mental trio type since it would be better to involve it in that type of fillers although there are not so many that I know) to make more history, how about mewtwo how are you going to do ?, you realize that if it starts in another region when they invite you it will cost you to get to where the movie happens, and the amount of pokemons well do not decrease, I mean that it has that amount or more, but make it slow and on time, ok ?. So for the fifth gym, for example, I already have 6 7 max that take time to evolve to lengthen things more, but most of them are already evolved to the maximum for the league, and remember, he is not a dark type teacher, or psychic, or ghost, he is Mental trio that that problem you dislocated at the beginning was dark then you started to develop interest in all three focus on all three from the beginning and voila. although you already know that but I remind you just in case, and that it is not so antagonistic if it does have social problems and trust that it develops slowly if it does not get together with one and say a friend of pure confidence and then when something happens who does not want to leave as if he betrayed him or something and romance does not involve much until it grows in a couple of years since many series are ruined or lose interest when they involve romance in a series that does not appear unless they are adult characters (That they are friends or that they have only interests but focus on the now and then when they are older that they do something if they want and make an effort to point it out since that love trio that had Naruto leaf and the oak that I do not remember the name were already seen that it caused problems because one did not co-commit anything, the other did not realize another seemed that they were a couple but they were nothing and then he comes out with another or is one thing or is another, end).

I hope to see more drama with the Namikaze family in the new version of this fic and Naruto not getting so many pokemons so quickly. Wishing you luck on your writings.

Dang kinda sad that you gonna rewrite the story, but can understand from where you are coming from. Really I dont mind how long it takes as long as you continue the story. But one thing I hope you do keep would be if you can make sabrina still travel with Naruto, because I really liked their time together and would love to see you make their character get a better screen time when you write the story.

I would suggest making it to where nicknames were earned rather than get rid of them entirely. The point is to give them more character than just the species, so I can see your point but it also dehumanizes the characters as they are not separated from their species. Besides that good luck man.