You said him and his attitude.
I mean isn’t she a girl?!

I love this book! If you need any help editing, or anything else, I will be of service!

This story definitely has a ton of potential, but I honestly think that it's biggest flaws, is the rather limited spell checking and proof reading.

I like the concept, and I do think it has good points, but it is hard to read it, when words that don't fit in an area, or words not being grammatically correct, makes it harder than it needs to be read.

Other than that, I do hope it continues anyway.

I dont luke your idea for killing inko. I mean if you want to traumatized a child. Or scaring them to death you cant just make the mother into coma right?.
Yes its too common to make them into coma but if you think it again you can make a lot more scenario with it. You can make them death in the future. Or someon targeting them. Or even making them back to life( or concious. I dont know) but its up to you Again after all

Well since his quirk is involve his emotion why dont think something that also include his emotion . like just say burning hatred. Wrath fire. Angry flame .. Or whatever i dont care. This is your story not mine

sick chapter! and personally I don't mind and actually kind of like the move names

what about calling his quirk the green blazes since he is the blazing hero ans his fire is green

Well I'm pissed off that you KILLED INKO OFF! I HOPE IZUKU'S DAD BECOMES A VILLAIN AND BURNS JAPAN TO GROUND AND EVERY WHORE IN IT!

godamn it , why make the sexiest girl his aunt ... its always like this authors decide that younger boys and older woman cant hook up .. its so fucking normal for a boy to date a woman who is 10 to 15 years older tsk tsk !

we want MILF !xD... back to the mather at hand great story hate you for killing off his mother could have done that way better then you did just a author dick move , you could have made him watch a innocent girl being killed and him not being able to do anything etc etc but hey lets kill his mom cause thats the best way for personal growth yeah ?

This is amazing keep up this story its freaking awesome

i couldn't think of better name but i got you something that would sound better.

draco flamma

which means dragon flame in Latin.

i hope that would be better.

Genetic Resurrection sounds like a better term for the 'genetic birth' operation.

cool

Good chapter and my suggestion for a quirk name would be;
1. Emerald inferno
2. Verdant embers
3. Hazy flame
Keep up the good work. Signed Dj K

these people act and speak like robots. Izuku has no personality. don't explain feelings and actions, describe them. the people seem more like props than humans.