The very next chapter?! The very next chapter! There isn't any :(. and I'm sad! I wanted to see snape's reaction. Mnghh!

update!

Ok, I already tried to write some reviews but they either appear delayed or they won't appear at all... ugh
Anyhow, I really like your fic so far and one of the reasons why I like it is that the bonding between Snape and Harry isn't rushed. There are so many fics out there that just ruin Shape's personality by turning him into mush after one or two chapters. I personally like it when he stays in character as much as possible, so please don't rush this!
I loved the interactions between the golden trio in this chapter! And it's really great how you write Harry with all his insecurities and the voices of his tormentors haunting him
I sincerely hope you will update soon but of real life can get in the way
Read you soon!

I can't believe this is your first fic and that English is not your first language! I'm not a native English speaker either but I can distinguish professionally written fanfics from less professional ones and you are doing great so far!
I'm on the third chapter and in love with it already. I btw love that you don't plan on having Harry and Snape bond in the near future; the weak point of most mentor Snape fics is that they turn him into mush in a matter of a few chapters. I love him snarky as he his.
I also loved how you handled the whole date with Cho, the one on canon was just...I can't even describe what that was! I just know I hated how it was handled in the books and I just felt awkward reading about that disastrous date. How you handled the situation was great especially how Cho now knows how Harry really feels toward her (I knew there was Veritaserum in that vial!)
Really kudos to how you handled it and I don't mind the kiss at all. Especially teenagers are just curious and want to try things out with their partners, it's usually not even about the love of their life but just for fun and to experience sth new.

I can't believe this is your first fix and that English is not your first language! I'm not a native English speaker either but I can distinguish professionally written fanfics from less professional ones and you are doing great so far!
I'm on the third chapter and in love with it already. I btw love that you don't plan on having Harry and Snape bond in the near future; the weak point of most mentor Snape fics is that they turn him into mush in a matter of a few chapters. I love him snarky as he his.
I also loved how you handled the whole date with Cho, the one on canon was just...I can't even describe what that was! I just know I hated how it was handled in the books and I just felt awkward reading about that disastrous date. How you handled the situation was great especially how Cho now knows how Harry really feels toward her (I knew there was Veritaserum in that vial!)
Really kudos to how you handled it and I don't mind the kiss at all. Especially teenagers are just curious and wnat to try things out with their partners, it's usually not even about the love of their life but just for fund and to experience sth new.

Just finished with the first chapter and this sounds quite promising, I love how long the first chapter was and I hope you keep this length up!

I don't know how I missed this story, but wow! Am completely in love with it. So good. Your characterizations are spot on. Thank you (especially with Ron. I hate fics where they make him a bumbling, oblivious trope. You do not. You keep his true character of fierce loyalty and support and friendship spot on.) I cannot wait for more of this fic. I hope you update soon.

This is actually decent mate. I honestly can’t wait for Snape tho, I want to see his reaction! Keep writing.

Can’t wait to read what comes next.

Pls update :3

Oo very interesting, i need more, thank you! :D

I like this fic, the rythm, the way you write, your notes at the bottom. Pleas, keep writing

As much as I want Snape to find out and destroy Toadbridge, its pretty great that you're taking time to focus on between Harry and his friends. Still want Snape to totally destroy Toadbridge though. Youre doing great!

Great story so far but it ended on a cliff hanger and now I want chapter 7?

/ninjas in

I'm sure I'm not the only one anxious for the Snape/Harry bonding to start but I really like the building up and the scenes between the trio in this chapter! I do like the pace that you have taken so far and I cannot wait for more! Thank you for the update as I had a difficult week and the notification email cheered me up a lot! :')