Very nice. A realistic scenario.

Nice touch with Gordon acting a little in Big Brother mode. Don’t get to see that often.

Loved it!

Looking forward to your future space elevator story. I asked gumnut to put that suggestion up for me as I can't work tumblr at all hence the mad user name. Love your John stories so can't wait! Ps really liking this also.

I love anything that includes John especially if people are worried about him. What does that say about me? Ha ha.
Loved this. See you soon. X

Nice on the first chapter can’t wait for me

Fantastic! Love the idea of Scott and EOS colluding against John. Very appropriate!

Knock out gas? Or a threat of having him put up with Ned & Gladys? :p
Got a laugh out of me! Love it!