Interesting take on the whole “Jaune Goes To Yharnam” plot, and aside from some lore issues, Im curious to see where it goes.

I am gonna admit the reference to the Zelda cartoon was unexpected but hilarious nonetheless. Interesting concept and story keep it up.

Really enjoying your story so far and I hope you keep it up.

This fic is actually pretty descent for a jaune centric crossover

This is too good, normally not a fan of "Jaune as a crossover OC" fics, but this one is very well executed and I can't wait to read more.

Yeah, although I don't like how flippant he is about the supposed attacks, it makes perfect sense in his situation. Someone that has spent years dying in the most horribly imaginable ways would very quickly lose any sense of self preservation and see most non-fatal maladies as flesh-wounds at most.
Nicely written and consistent story up to this point.

update when? love your writing style, rlly hope ya come back to this

Nice. A crappy Zelda game and an Undertale reference. I can get behind this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, now that I've read all the way through the current point.

what is this epic first chapter?

Hope this story lives as it is very interesting.
Regretfully I have binge-read the story within such a short time as to be left wanting.

Looking forward to more.

Really promising setup.
The story starts off quite well and I look forward to future chapters, as hopefully neither you nor this story are truly dead and gone.

After all, were you to be dead, there wouldn't be any more.

I’m really enjoying this story it’s taking the scary undertones of Bloodborne with some good comedy, never thought I’d see a legend of Zelda cartoon reference In a Bloodborne crossover I hope the next chapter comes out soon, keep up the great work.

Solid story so far, Jaune retaining all his abilities from the Dream might be a bit excessive but despite that its very good so far. My only complaint is that as far as I know Queen Annalise is immortal. She literally cannot be killed which is why she was sealed away instead of destroyed.

Nice story fam, jaune is likeable and I'm excited to see what's up with old hunters rocking up on remnant being established fact. Hope you write more

Is this dead? please continue it, i really like it