Reviews for La llorona
Under Of Flower chapter 7 . 7/31
I'm so happy to see a update
Kratosthegodslayer chapter 6 . 6/23
Another great chapter, I can't wait to see how this story continually developes! Maybe in a future chapter you could bring in the Kankers? That would be really cool!
Redboat chapter 6 . 6/21
Good chapter. Hope that Edd and Mel's improve.
Kratosthegodslayer chapter 5 . 5/31
I really enjoy the formula you're using to bring in each new chapter! I hope that the relationship between Edd and his now sister molds even tighter over time into perhaps something more. This chapter was entertaining as it brought in more insight from the side characters to the well being of Edd. The matter of the bullies is also quite intriguing. Keep up the great work! This is definitely becoming one of the better stories I've read on this site!
Kratosthegodslayer chapter 1 . 5/24
This story is coming along really nicely! I'm enjoying the development between Edd and Mel. I can't wait to see how it further progresses down the road. It would be intriguing to see romantic tendencies start to make themselves known between the two characters in the future as well.
Redboat chapter 4 . 5/15
Good story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Mr.legoman chapter 3 . 4/23
An interesting start so far. im interested to see how Mel's and Edd's relationship will develop. Anyways keep up the good work.