Why not do a fic where you explore Susanoos origin in greater detail, like how he gained a soul or diving deeper into this thoughts and character

It's always nice seeing fics involving Terumi, especially ones that delve more into his character. It was also great seeing Susano'o make an appearance. There really isn't enough on this guy.

I liked the way you described the fight (very few grammatical errors too, so that's a plus) and I enjoyed the twist at the end. Nice story!

Great