I'm sorry, but I'm so tired of these slave scenes that I'm dropping the story. This is getting bad man. Not bad writing, but it feels like you're dragging this on because you don't know where to take Jon next. Good luck with the rest of your story.

This is a promising fic, I really enjoyed it, specially Ned being more responsible, but I think it’s time for Jon to escape and be free? I get the feeling of 1000s worms crawling in my skin every time I read about the slave part and it terrifies me, I condemn slavery, and glad it’s mostly gone now,

Very good chapter.
Keep writing.
Blessings and good health to you and your loved ones.

Oh, finally Mordane is out.

A great chapter, I liked the way you made Ned deal with the seven.

Another great chapter and one that shows us what’s happening elsewhere. Still, and I reiterate what I wrote in my last review, this is a perfect place for a timeskip for Jon’s arc. When we next see him hopefully we can see how he has already mastered or has control over his warging powers and the trust of the other slaves thereby leading to the inevitable confrontation with the slavers and ultimately the conclusion of the slavers arc in a chapter or two. You’ve maybe hinted as how that could be accomplished having Stannis and Wendel in the Stepstones but whether you go with that route or not is up to you.

I'm liking the Winterfell story, but im hoping that the Jon slave story ends soon cause it's gone on a bit too long so I mostly just skip them

the winterfell stuff is interesting and cool, but the slave Jon storyline is getting a little stale.
but still can't wait for next chapter

don't know what you want to get with Jon to get to the bay of slaves and meet Daenerys that obviously would be a mistake or maybe that will get to Valirya but really this Jon Slave arc has already taken a long time and I don't see it coming soon. In the end, I honestly don't know where Jon is going to take this situation and I agree that he's getting boring and I don't see any progress or development for Jon.

Continúe soon Please

Pretty good. I think it would've been better if Ned threatened to burn the other guy inside the sept instead.

Very nice.

Good chapter. Go Ned!

this was a great read i loved that bit with ned showing his wolf blood it was great was that letter that ned put in fire from jon arryn if it was that is where it belongs i cant wait for the next chapter please update as soon as you can and that punishment for sansa and arya was on point please please update as soon as you can please

Props to Ned for his restraint. Personally I probably would've killed the hag.