Reviews for The unbreakable shield
the mysterious Mr.E chapter 10 . 7/7
That was awesome! I cannot wait to see the aftermath party. Now you got me curious. I've seen fanfics where Deku was the shield hero and I've seen one with bakugou. I wonder what would happen if Shoto Todoroki was the shield hero?
blackshadowpanther chapter 10 . 7/2
Fun story so far! Glad I found it. If you don't mind I have a shied idea.

Name: Spectral Shield

Unlock Condition: Must defeat 20 spectral enemies in one sitting and/or help 20 pass on peacefully.

Bonuses: 5 speed, 5 Vitality, and 10 Defense

Equip Skill: Unseen Servant- An unseen servant is an invisible, mindless, shapeless force that performs simple tasks at your command. It can run and fetch things, open unstuck doors, and hold chairs, as well as clean and mend. The servant can perform only one activity at a time, but it repeats the same activity over and over again if told to do so as long as you remain within range.

Unique Equip Skill: Invisibility- Become invisible for 2 min/lvl as long as concentration is kept.

Or

Intangibility- ability to walk through walls and physical attacks just pass through the body harmlessly.

Appearance: a small circular shield made of a translucent crystal with a ghostly cloth draped over it that moves as if a breeze is moving it even when there is none.
hellsingsage chapter 9 . 6/26
Name:Duling Shield
Unlock Condisions:Broken Longsword
Bonuses: 10 ATK 10 SPE 10 SP -40 DEF
Equip Skill:Smite;once every minute "Smite" can be activated for a 3 damage multiplier.
Unique Equip Skill:True Smite;once every minute "True Smite" can be activated for a 5 damage multiplier. Elemental smite; once every minute "Elemental Smite" can be activated for a 3 damage multiplier 3 damage of an elemental variety to a elemental crystal that can be placed into the shield while "Duling Shield" is equipped the crystal is consumed and gives the blade 5 charges per crystal charges can be stored up to 20 of each element type .
hellsingsage chapter 6 . 6/26
please up the chapter length
Magnus9284 chapter 10 . 6/20
It seems like you are giving the three idiots heroes some Aqua levels of usefulness. I'm not complaining though.

Also, nice nod to the lack of common sense from the typical mages and their foot wear.
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 10 . 6/19
Keep up the amazing work!

I'm Sorry for stopping the story;

I've realized how good it was ACTUALLY getting!
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 9 . 6/19
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!

I'm REALLY Looking forward to the next chapter!
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 8 . 6/19
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!

YES! NEW PARTY MEMBERS!
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 7 . 6/19
KEEP Up the Amazing work!

THANK GOODNESS; That's a HUGE Relief!

I'm Glad that Kirishima ONLY Bought her so that he could free her!

OK. . . I'm Sorry for my rash judgement; I'm Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
RedBurningDragon chapter 10 . 6/19
Rip using mobile site and didnt see the typo i meant 100 def lol
Chain Shield
Gotten by absorbing a length of chain
Equip skill Anchor Howl in a 15-20 meter radius any one he sees as an enemy Is compelled to attack him and is unable to attack anyone else for 10 mins
Equip bonus 20 def
Stats 50 defs
Unique skill Phantom Bindings summon spectral chains to bind his opponents movement at a 10 meter radius (chain strength is based on half his total defense) effects last 15 mins or until he moves
maskedkeeper chapter 1 . 6/11
i enjoyed the story but i do have a few complaints. kirishima had a manly "go to hell" moment when he was accused of rape. and he was like fuck this im out. which is fine for his character, but then you gave him the same trama of naufumi(lacking the ability to taste food). he may have been angry but he definitely wasn't a loner betrayed and abandoned to suffer .

secondly he was epic in the beginning single handedly killing monsters and using his quirk, but by chapter 9 he still got a slave and used her to attack. i need more him using his manlyness to smake monster around with his fist.
Darkdragondude1234 chapter 9 . 6/6
Name: Phoenix feather shield
unlock conditions: needs to complete the Elder Phoenixs tree trials, which is Trial of heart, Trial of Courage and finally the trial of honor. materials needed for unlocking (elder phoenix feather, ember of the eternal flame chalice and flame from the elder phoenix's life breath)
bonuses: 5000 to all stats and elemental damage immunity to cold, fire, air, and lightning
equip skills: Phoenix flight (gives the wings of a phoenix and allows the person who is using this skill to fly), Phoenix flames (burn target with intense flames that can melt pretty much anything short of a elder dragon in a instant), phoenix abyss spell (chant: as i call upon the primordial plane, burn and incinerate all enemy targets and leave nothing but ashes, PHOENIX ABYSS!)
design: think of rise of the phoenix kite shield from path of exile and you have what it looks like.
hmnaftrall chapter 9 . 6/6
While the premise of the story did intrigue me, the rest of the story hasn't really been doing much. As you chalk it up you're "lazy" and "not creative", you really just seem to be writing this story for fun. That's great! That's how it should be. I fully intend to read whatever you write, but for now this story just seems to be a rehash of other fics I've read.
The main question I have is, "What's the direction of this story?" The tag you used is listed as Fantasy/Parody. I can only assume that means you plan on this being a light hearted tale. But will it strictly be that, are you just flying by the seat of your pants, or have you simply not thought that far?
If you were to make the story a bit more somber, maybe try making Kirishima start to question the choices he's made later down the road. "Would a hero really do this? How would Fat-Gum or Aizawa handle this?"
At the end of the day it is YOU'RE FANFIC, so the choice is always yours.
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 6 . 6/5
SERIOUSLY?!

I Don't see Kirishima as someone who'd willingly harbor slaves!
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 5 . 6/5
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!

WHEN'S THE C*** GONNA GET HER BASHING?!
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