Reviews for The Maelstrom of Chicago PD
Naruto4ever2000 chapter 10 . 10/4
Hi please continue and take your time.
hellfire45 chapter 10 . 10/3
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and damn I can’t wait to see how Naruto will handle this
Seraph chapter 10 . 9/29
Save darius and bring minato back because it will balance out the challenge in the future chapters
demon87 chapter 10 . 9/29
very super
Dopeenight chapter 10 . 9/29
Ok I like it this chapter. It dealt with a very serious episode in the show as well as fleshed out some characters. So I had three ideas for you. Disclaimer whether ir not you use these ideas I still am a fan if the story and will continue to read it. Ok so first idea is adding a old girlfriend of his that use to run with him back when we worked for Darius. Make her like a Queepin of her own gang that tries to get Naruto to join her. Second idea, Earlier in the story you said Naruto went to school in got a degree in some sort of science(I cant remember which one) that could be a cover for something like a CIA agent or an assassin or something. Or he could have used his degree to make him alot if money illegally or something. Third final idea, (Two part idea) a. At some point in the story you could have him an Erin hookup once. b. A 3 or 4 way love interest. While I know that right now Nadia and Naruto are in the honeymoon phase it would be interesting to see a Naruto playing the field so to speak, and also getting multiple females to fall for him but he can only choose one. Thanks for your time. Cant wait to see if you do or dont incorporate any I'd my ideas and cant wait for the next chapter.
NinjaFang1331 chapter 10 . 9/29
Excellent update thank you and great ending to the chapter
Dark Link M Smith chapter 10 . 9/29
oh thank god you back
Kail990 chapter 10 . 9/29
I like this story, looking forward to how you will continue with this. Nice idea to involve the series SWAT as well.
SilveerKnighT chapter 10 . 9/29
Hope next one dont take so long
Bladewolf101 chapter 9 . 9/2
I wonder what Naruto will be like when Nadia is abducted in the Chicago P.D and Law and Order SVU crossover.
Armyj88 chapter 9 . 8/29
Hope you haven’t forgotten about this story.
SilveerKnighT chapter 1 . 8/9
Once again fic abandonned around the 10th chapter...
Armyj88 chapter 9 . 7/7
Love the new spin using hondo
hellfire45 chapter 9 . 7/4
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next
Guest chapter 9 . 6/25
Voight seems very hard on Naruto.
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