Character bashing is an immature and unimaginative fanfiction trope

Bon chapitre

Love the story so far and can’t wait to read more. So when will the soul bond come into play?

please update immediately

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So how long til the girls realize they BOTH can have Harry and be satisfied? Also, where are the twins? This story is lacking of their fun. That and I'm wondering when Draco will make an apperance to complain about Krum's arrest.

I dunno why you only pick some words to be accented (for Fleur) but I also wonder why you prefer to jump ahead to events. But hey, its your story but it just seems more...lacking this way.

While I'm not sure of what to make of the revamp of CoS, I mean Draco eager to kill Ginny to...make the basisisk his familar? No. Firstly how would that work? It's creative I'll grant you but bit OOC

If it wasn't for the brief flashbacks I'd be thinking this chapter was a bit...jumped. I mean you listed the prev chapter ended 12/11 and here we are at 12/25? You really don't want to in the inbetween details just jump ahead.

Also I know this story is a break from canon in a big way but this? Rather large break I think.

Plus we haven't seen any reaction, at all, from the twins. Canon would say they'd side with Harry over Ginny bec they know she's in the wrong.

I have but one question regards to this chapter as the story is developing. (points at Luna) Why hasn't she told of her past history with GInny? She is, after all, well aware of Ron's rude behavior.

Wow! Amazing. Update soon.

SOMEONE NEEDS TO TELL GINGIN THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN FANTASY AND REALITY!