great story!

Lovely!

I enjoyed this little cute story so much. As someone who's currently doing a PhD in microbiology its interesting to see science thrown in there like that. If i could make a small critique though i feel like your chapters could have done with being fleshed out a little more. Emotions, scenery, what are the characters doing outside of the conversation that kind of thing. Thank you for posting xx

What a cute fun read! Thank you for sharing!

Doesn't anyone knock in the WW? Isn't there a way of locking the floo so anybody & his brother can't just arrive? Wide open as Hermione apparently keeps it, an older DE who found out about her research and decided to end it could enter without warning, AK both women and leave. With their history it's completely negligent.

Doesn't Ginny do anything with her spare time but sit around drinking wine? I almost didn't start reading this due to the Ginny/Harry pairing. Why does Hermione constantly get paired with interesting men when Harry usually gets stuck with Ginny? As is obvious, I don't like Ginny's character. JKR made an admitted mistake with her major pairings and fans accepted it. Writers have gone on to pair Hermione with nearly every male character in canon, while continually sticking Harry with Ginny. They really have nothing in common other than love of the Weasley family, quidditch and possession by Voldemort. Possession by an insane murderer isn't a good basis for building a lifetime and the rest isn't enough. Apologies for the rant. Thanks

Great ending! I loved this story. Very interesting idea with the genetics.

I LOVED THIS!

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Sing a song of shipping,
That'll make you cry,
Smart & decent Muggleborn,
Forced into this lie!

When the plot was opened
Readers began to wail ,
Coz they tried to stick her with Draco,
A total utter fail!

JK was in the World Bank,
Counting out her cash,
Despairing at this pairing,
That is completely trash!

Dramione authors were typing on the net,
Writing out their silly fics,
Never really realising yet,
They look like total dicks!

Sing of wish for filament,
That just goes on & on & on,
Coz so many of these shippers,
Just want to shag Tom Felt-on!

When this ship was ruined,
They began to scream,
As sane intelligent reviewers,
Poured scorn upon their dreams!

(this edited flame is a collaboration between those on hogwarts ***** ***** chatgroup 05/10/20
thanks to all involved)

Awww, did Hermione realize Draco slipped that he loves her?!

Awww finally! Hopefully they don’t wake up and make it into. Problem! They deserve some happiness!

This chapter was wonderful 3 the party scene especially nice to read, I don’t know it was just so casual and normal but interesting at the same time. It can be difficult writing about stuff like that but you managed it really well

It’s really fun getting more tidbits of memory of their time together back in hogwarts, and their interaction in the hotel room was very enjoyable and funny

I like this explanation of them having history, for five months! I read a story... yesterday (days are all jumbled together now) where there was a mention they had been together before but then nothing more, no elaboration or anything and that didn’t interest me. THIS definitely interested me, and now the reader (me) will read more into their relationship and interactions. Love it

Probably my favorite chapter so far! Love Draco teasing Hermione and her taking it in a good nature. Can’t wait for the next chapter!