Those 8 chapters were very nice. I'm glad you skipped the first 3 years and the explanation of what happened was nice. I'm looking forward for the following chapters. Keep it up with such a good work

I like it

I like the twist on the twins story, instead of James and Lilly abusing one twin and not the other , it’s the Dursley’s which I can’t say I’ve seen before.

Great chapter

Things are definitely picking up now, and I’m glad you skipped over the first 3 years. It would have been a pretty standard path anyway, and we can now finally see the Harry/Fleur relationship grow.

Looking forward to seeing how their meeting goes in the next chapter.
Great work as always.

love it! thank you! more please!

Fun, easy to read and the dialogues are pretty good too. What else do you want? Keep up with the good work man.

Very interesting. Cant wait to see how bella will react to Hermione being found. But ron is a nasty shit. Almost killed her too with that stunt. On another tangent, how does no one seem to recognize tom riddle you would think walking around Diagon ally with everyone some should eventually point out the guy that has scary red eyes with an evil presence is the dark lord. Anyway i cantvwait for more.

Excellent Story... Carry On...

story will make no sense if harry is paired with fleur since she is vela even if only half or whatever voldy would have either harry kill her or he kill's both harry and fleur or harry and fleur kill voldy

Hello,

So I have been following this story since it began and I’m now chastising myself for not leaving a review until now. I do find that it’s absolutely fascinating how Tom Riddle can still be “dark” while being a more-or-less appropriate father figure for young Harry. That being said I love your unique take on the story. I specifically enjoyed how you still managed to keep Harry’s prowess on a broom and have him join the Slytherin team if for nothing else than to show the great “pretender to the throne” who the real king is, in a manner of speaking. In whole I love this story and I cannot wait to see this grow and how you work Fleur into the mix. Harry x Fleur for life! In any event, this was a great chapter! Keep up the great work!

Respectfully,

TheLifeLongEditor

Are you seriously not gonna have Weasly get in trouble for blatantly trying to kill Hermione? Even Snape saw and there was not one threat of expulsion. Seems like a major oversight on author's part. This would be a good way to expel Weasly or to do something, anything

Great start!

Story’s coming along nicely.
I came for the Harry/Fleur pairing, but you’ve really intrigued me with the whole Riddle angle to it all.
Keen to see how the rest of the story unfolds.
Also want to thank you for writing a Harry/Fleur fix. I don’t see too many of these ones popping up, and there are far too many fics that claim to be Harry/Fleur, but dilute the relationship by turning it into a multi or harem pairing.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hey the formating needs to be fixed; it is appearing as code.