Reviews for Fate Grand Order: The Queen of Shadows
BravoSix1311 chapter 10 . 8/16
Woohoo! Finally they met!
Jackejsh chapter 10 . 8/16
YES! SHE FINALLY APPEARS! I love how she utterly trounced everyone in this chapter, truly a top-tier waifu/servant
amerdism chapter 10 . 8/15
Finally she appears
Guest chapter 10 . 8/15
Okay okay looking good so far
BravoSix1311 chapter 9 . 7/25
Wow this is cool and very long chapter. I like it! Tnx for the update cant wait for the next one
SupergodzillaSailorCosmos chapter 8 . 6/27
A really cool story.
I'm very excited to see how our heroes will settle in with Chu's master and above all how Arturia and Mordred will be reconciled.

Please continue to write quickly.

With kind regards SupergodzillaSailorCosmos
hoeyster1998 chapter 8 . 6/5
Another great chapter
hoeyster1998 chapter 7 . 5/25
Another good chapter! Keep up the good work!
Roxas Strife chapter 7 . 5/24
Your fic is very good, although something catches my attention, and that is that if the story is after America, at least the Masters should know Schatach since she appeared in that singularity
BravoSix chapter 5 . 4/28
Also if you are bringing the crypters at this stage, can we see Scathach-Skadi too? Just curious...
BravoSix chapter 5 . 4/28
That last part in Chaldea made me laugh XD. Great chapter 7empest! Keep it up!
Avenger013 chapter 5 . 4/27
Mmmm…bringing in the Crypters now, when Goetia's not even been beaten yet, doesn't really seem at all logical.

Still, I'll see where this goes.
Sir Something chapter 3 . 4/16
It's a bit awkward when you say how characters are speaking before they've said anything. Like when you did: "DaVinci elaborated" then wrote her dialogue.

On another note, the paragraphs where you describe a new character break the flow of the story. You could probably get away with a brief physical description when they first get on 'scene' and have another character say their name. You don't need to go into their history in an out of context post. If they're important to the story you'll have other opportunities to explain parts of their history in more natural ways.

Other than those two criticisms, I've liked what I've read.
omegadramon2 chapter 3 . 4/15
Love were your going with this story keep

FYI ever think about just renaming Female protogist Ritsuka (after the anime version) that way its sound like a Japanese name, But if you like it as is that's find i was just putting the Suggestion out there.
Toa Solaric chapter 2 . 4/7
Curious about how the Queen of the Shadow would helped the team.
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