I love how you chose to characterize the Fairy Queen, it’s super cute! Makes ya wonder if we’ll ever see her in a major role.
The writing is phenomenal, as usual. This one has a more cute, comfy vibe, which I think fits Kirby 64 really well.
I think that Ribbon could be given a bit more time and characterization. Also, Bandana Dee’s stuttering gets a little annoying to read, I think it could be toned down a bit, and he wouldn’t lose much character.
Overall, though, really good fic! Keep putting out great content.

FINALLY! You've gotten around to my favorite Kirby game! Loved the Crystal Shards, and loved how you portrayed the "Crystal Squad"!