I hope Jaune bangs Lilith.

this had potential, its to bad you used the Trash can, I mean Jaune as a Mary Sue Main char.

This story has potential im following

Interesting story.

Another great update

Connecting both worlds? I'm somewhat hesitant on this really.

Remnant by no means is a peaceful or stable world but they manage themselves find against the Grimm despite divisions among themselves like racism between humans and faunas. The MG world is an overworked Japanese salaryman's wet dream in the form of beautiful lustful girls but looking deeper into it is also a snu snu death world.

I feel that Lilith is not giving Ruby and Jaune the whole story on purpose or her views are really that skewed right now. Demonic energy in their world is potent and their is no telling how it interacts with Remnant of things. Considering Jaune hasn't shown any signs of being effected I'm guessing Aura users can counter demonic energy. But I wonder how that energy interacts with the Grimm?

I just love how you have made the world of MGE more wholesome than normal, and I'm not talking about sex-wise - rather, I'm talking about tone. All too often, people treat Monster Girl Encyclopedia too grimly, making the monsters out to be a lot worse than they actually are. Here, the monsters are still obviously lustful, sex-driven, and aggressive in that respect, but you also make it clear that many of them are genuinely good, caring people. Lilith is upfront about some of the key problems in this world, but they're ones that she's trying to overcome, so things don't seem bad really.

Actually, even the Radicals aren't that bad. They mostly work to help the suffering and fight injustices, and it feels like there's a lot of camaraderie in the army. Given how Lescatie had some magical muskets that the Radicals enhanced once they took over, I could see Ruby bonding with some of the musketeers over that topic.

Point is, I like that we're getting a chance to see the kinder, more hopeful side of the monsters' renaissance, and even if you bring in more lecherous stuff later on, I hope the overall comfy feel doesn't go away. I've seen a lot of reviews asking for something bad like Ruby turning against her grandmother, but please don't listen to them.

You have a lot of fun, cute, and sweet moments I love, like how Ruby's tail is wagging at the thought of Jaune. And Baphy-chan's accent was really fun.

I'm guessing the next big thing Ruby will learn is the art of transforming others into monsters. Now, since there's already a presence with the Snake God Cult in MGE, I have a headcanon that the Demon Lord would keep a small group of pure human women as handmaidens to young Lilim. These girls have special protection from corruption, but that doesn't matter, since they already believe in the Mamono Lord's mission and basically volunteered for the honor of becoming a monster girl. It's traditional for a young Lilim's first transformation to be one of these lucky volunteers. It helps emphasize that monsterization is a gift that the Lilim are blessing others with.

Later, I could imagine Ruby browsing through a copy of the encyclopedia, Lilith wanting her to read over them to understand the different things she can turn people into. And gradually, she starts lightly daydreaming about what different friends of hers would be like as certain Mamono, only to snap herself out of it each time.

I'm very curious to see who Baphy introduces Ruby to. I've found the recent world guide materials on the Sabbath and its specific chapters to be quite fascinating.

Also, will Ruby visit Dragonia? I loved reading the information about that land, and there's a lot to see and do there. The Seven Song Islands currently being translated on Monster Girls Redux are cool, too.

One last thing: I have a few grammatical/stylistic corrections here and there. In addition to the changes listed below, you have a habit of not using commas at the end of quotes when transitioning to a speaker. ""Morning Jaune." Ruby said" should be ""Morning Jaune," Ruby said", for example. Also, you occasionally shift from the predominant past tense to present tense, like in the scene back on Remnant.

"fall asleep within the strange castle they have found themselves in." should be "fall asleep within the strange castle they found themselves in."

"With the soft silken sheets and their exhaustion eventually winning over" should be "The soft, silken sheets and their exhaustion eventually won over"

"tried moving only to feel a small weight resting" should be "tried moving, only to feel a small weight resting"

""Nonsense, you look breathtaking? Perhaps we require a third opinion."" should be ""Nonsense, you look breathtaking. Perhaps we require a third opinion?""

"red cape pinned to the top and from the look on Ruby's face she wanted to use said cape to cover herself more only it was being held" should be "red cape pinned to the top, and from the look on Ruby's face, she wanted to use said cape to cover herself more, only it was being held"

"green thumb back home but nothing on Patch" should be "green thumb back home, but nothing on Patch"

"Her fight against Jaune is hardly one to get her adrenaline pumping but he at least surprised her" should be "Her fight against Jaune was hardly one to get her adrenaline pumping, but he at least surprised her"

"angry amber eyes looked to Crocea Mors." should be "angry amber eyes glared at Crocea Mors."

"this isn't a lesson boy." should be "this isn't a lesson, boy."

"A missed swing did not mean she was defenseless as she had kicks" should be "A missed swing did not mean she was defenseless, as she had kicks"

All in all, this was another great chapter that makes me curious to see what happens next. Thanks again for continuing this!

Good chapter! Through I am not sure how demonic energy will affect people from Remnant I would imagine it would not affect them, with how the chief god made the MGE human and the way Remnants human came about.

I’m enjoying this. Please don’t make it a harem or I’m going to have to drop it.

I'm not pretty sure how Demonic Energy would affect the people of Remnant, the Faunus or the Grimm since they were not the Creations of the Chief God but the Creations of the Two Brothers, that said, the Older Brother creates the new humans after Salem's Rebellion against the Brother Gods.

The Grimm were made of pure darkness, therefore, creations of the Dark God. Pretty much the DE doesn't effect on Grimm.

Humans and possibly, the Faunus, on Remnant on the other hand were born from Dust after the Gods left Remnant. Pretty much is that the Spirits within the people of Remnant and the Spirit Energy of the Humans in MGE are two different life essence. Therefore, the Demonic Energy doesn't have any effects on people who lives in a different plane of reality. Pretty much is that the Females of Remnant wouldn't be be monsterized.

Since Ruby is born as a Mamono yet there is a different life essence that resides within in her which she shared from her Father, Taiyang, like her Aura or having a mixed soul. Therefore, it might be the reason why it kept still kept her having a rational mind and still a sane girl since they are currently living within the Royal Makai where Demonic Energy has the DENSEST, thus upon touching her sensitive Mamono traits would like to be how a Faunus felt like.

I can see weiss blake yang ren nora pyrrha reaction to ruby being a scuubus and jaune as her husband and ruby being protectve of jaune and saying no to pyrrha that she Can't have jaune and she lost her chance with him.

I'm glad that Lilith brought up the whole population decline thing with mamono not being able to give birth to males and only females, or more specifically mamono's in general. But I feel just only lightly touched the issue because the reality of it is humans on this world are slowly dying out due to no three factors.

-Monsters being only able to give birth to monsters
-Males when exposed to demonic energy get turned in incubus (which also effects their mentality as well as their physiology)
-Human females are monsterized when exposed to demonic energy

Only with these factors is the big problem of DE (demonic energy). DE is like radiation dialed up to 100 since it effects literally everything it touches. From inanimate objects (we have examples of certain mamono who started out as dolls or umbrellas and such) to plants, animals, mythical creatures the land itself and even eldritch beings from other worlds. Letting stuff like that spread to Remnant has consequences but I have no idea how it effects things like Dust, people with Aura or Grimm. Jaune has spent quite some time in a monsterized domain with no side effects so far of being incubuized so I guess his Aura is what's protecting him.

Over I think Lilith underplayed the issue with connecting both worlds by a vast amount so I hope something like that is brought up later or possibly when Jaune and Ruby see the 'other' unforeseen consequences of DE on this world.

Yay and for some reason is see Den and Nora arguing over this. "Nora no I will not be the center of a Harem with getting to be lead girl."

"Come on Ren, we know Jaune is going to be in one now with Princess Rwby her team and Pyra. Not mention all the monster girls. Why can't we have one to as we serve the Princess!"

"One Jaune is being forced in to it by his poor luck. Two you just want to use it as a excuse to have three-somes or full orgies, as well as to have Fox girls to hug the tails of girls with testicles to make and sell your own pornography and so you can try and become a monmo just cause you can."

"So your saying that if I just do it with out you consent it's ok but you will scold me about but still go along?"

"Nora..."

"Ren..."

"Nora no!"

"Nora YES! Hay Ruby! What monster girls have lighting power or can summon storms!? I want to become something that lets me power up at will!"

"Nora stop! I mean it! No pancakes for a two weeks!"

"Worth it for Ren centered orgies!"

finished reading the second chapter, was pretty good.
Overall another fine chapter that delves into the MGQ world, but we do see the reaction of Ruby and Jaune's team towards their disappearance, so that's swell.
There's a sense of progression in this story even if it initially seems to be stagnant. So I am very excited to see the next chapter and the reaction of both Rub and Jaune's team towards Ruby's physical change.

Im loving this. I just have one request if possible: Yang and Neo turning into hellhounds and their target is jaune XD