Reviews for Prunella's Secret
ZoeyCares chapter 9 . 7/23
I am glad you finished up your story... Maybe your next story can be Buster X Ladonna to make Muffy jealous?
ZoeyCares chapter 8 . 7/6
Good chapter. I look forward to seeing them be a happy couple. Please do more stories as well...

If you ever watch LPS I love Biskit stories.
update chapter 1 . 6/30
update
ZoeyCares chapter 7 . 6/10
ALL the support from me! I know a ton of people must read your story and just not care to review or just don't have . But I LOVE your story so I hope my support burns a benelovent and good fire to help you! Also I don't mind an alternating schedule as long as it's sooner rather than later...

When Arthur and Francine have a better relationship than Buster and Muffy! TBH Arthur and Francine are super cute here!Buster has it rough and TBH it may be evil but I want him and her to attempt to make up nd have parody mishaps prevent it from happening! HaHaHa I Am EVOL! But You did a good job. Love how the couples are the complete opposite. I bet if Buster had said "You're Right" they would have made up! Maybe Buster can do something stupid like try to get a new gf to make Muffy jealous... Maybe Jenna? And then Muffy attacks her... I am being Evol again...

George got all the chips? Hope he shares them with Fern Fern W00t W00t!

NEED MORE NOW!
ZoeyCares chapter 6 . 6/4
HaHaHa! I KNEW It! And OMG that is sooo adorable!

I am sorry I have not reviewed properly last time. I am having some annoying situations to process right now...

So now that the secret is revealed... Sorta... Technically there was no confession and Arthur and Buster may not know for sure that A and B means Alan/Brain.

What happens now that we know the secret?

Are there any more secrets or just that one?

How will Prunella and Alan become a couple?

So here are my thoughts currently...

If Arthur and Buster do not know who the crush is would they ask for help from Brain? He is smart after all right? Or from Francine and Muffy? It would be cute to see more about those couples too...

OR of they know what will they do? Will they interfere or just return the diary? Will there be an issue preventing the diary from being returned? Maybe someone could also read it and fall for Prunelle thinking she likes them? IF they interfere will chaos insue? Maybe they will try double/triple dating to fix Arthur, Buster, and Prunellas HeartAches/troubles? And then more chaos...

What if Brain likes someone else? Ok maybw he seems ro like Prunella back... but why? Or what if someone asks him out before Prunella does? If he said yes then Prunella's heart would shatter but what of he said "No, Sorry. There is actually somone I currently am interested in?"... I'm sure Prunella's heart would be racing with thoughts. Also going to assumw it wouls HAVE to be Muffy asking him out. That would be hilarious. She has a somewhat "Stuck Up" manner and in some ways is actually similar to Prunella so who knows... What if Buster got so mad he right up punchea Brain? Am I getting too Out Of Character?

What would the real worst case scenario be? Maybe Arthur and Buster returning the diary and saying they know she likes Alan and when she denies it, They all turn to see that he had been watching and had heard and leaves with a simple "I gotta go!"? And when they all meet back up and Brain is asked he says some mean stuff about thinking Prunella's ideas are silly or something which makes he hurt and say something back and then... all that kind of drama type stuff?

On another note: About Snacks: I want ALL of those! And I was eating a "Planters: Nuts and Chocolate ,- Trail Mix - with m&ms, peanuts, almonds, and raisins" while reading this chapter.

Or will Prunella just confess tonight and happily ever after?

Brain And Prunella K! I! S! S! I! N! G!

TBH story needs more Fern... maybe X George.

I sorta kinda Arthur gets stuck in a locker...

And is it wrong I want to read more drama and arguing between Muffy and Buster? Hmm What happenes to Buster?
ZoeyCares chapter 5 . 6/3
Free Review.. Time for next chapter.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/12
I’m going to guess that the A stands for Alan and the B stands for Brain.
ZoeyCares chapter 4 . 5/10
So Marina isn't an option if we take her word for it... Also I completely had forgotten about the character Lydia.

So I was looking up A and B and Alan Aka Brain is the only one I found with the first name being both and A and a B... Perhaps he is?... Or...

...or... I wonder... No... No way...

...Although the conspiracy theorist in me is thinking... A and B... Apples And Bananas! Her sister likes food and has a thing for Ice Cream... But not just ANY ice cream... Strawberry Ice Cream... Strawberry like a fruit which A And B. Apples and Bananas are also Fruits too... Soo... Prunella may love Apples and Bananas! Perhaps of the ice cream variety!? [SHOCK?!]

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Even so I hope you add more couple in this story as well. I noticed you have not had Prunella in the story much lately so I wonder if it's just going to be held off until the ending with cliffhanger after cliffhanger after cliffhanger after cliffhanger after cliffhanger after cliffhanger after cliffhanger and all that type of thing and then just be something obvious or something completely different? But I hope you reveal early if there is an actual character she likes so we can see the progression and if she find someone to have a relationship with or get rejected but I do hope we don't get left hanging without getting a resounding conclusion that answers all the questions in any readers mind - except maybe certain wandering to far minds -... But not me... My mind never wonders. I stay on the same topic and never change. Although wonder is like a weird word. Say wonder a few times... It sounds so weird... Weird also is a weird world...Just like the word world... Also a weird word... And that one time I forgot how to spell the word world... That was pretty bad back when I went to the library and played video games all the time. I used to play RuneScape... ... ... What were we talking about?
ZoeyCares chapter 3 . 5/9
Oh yes! Double Chapter Update!? Ok read this first chapter... A plus P and B Plus P...Maybe Prunella has a thing for both Arthur AND Buster and wants a three way?

Meanwhile Rubella and IceCream have their own thing going on!? [SHOCK] lol
707 chapter 2 . 5/7
Oh, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Continue chapter 1 . 5/4
Please continue.
Zoey Cares chapter 2 . 4/28
No! I hath accidentally posted before finishing...I had meant to say...

Make more ships... Sail the Titanics into oceans of iceburgs... Have them navigate the waves the unknown... Conquer the trepidations or whatever of the unknown...I said unknown twice whatever this is an epic passage...

Anyways I ship Prunella with Jenna AND Rubella with .

A good story with Rubella X Ratburn is "Learning To Breath" by Lina Shay.

And if you wanna read a massive ship you can check out MY story "Arthur:Perspectives which is on my MLPStevenUniverseLPS which has Prunella X Jenna... But it only starts on chapter 38.

Maybe Prunella likes her sister? I know that may be really weird to some people...?

Ultimately I don't mind... She could love Arthur or Sue Ellen or Binky or. Mr. Haney...

I just gogle searched and found she is best friends with Marina. Maybe they are the couple?

Btw another fic is Marina X Buster (not Prunella unfortunately) is by DASL and is called "Online Love"

Anyways "Learning To Breathe" and "Online Love" are two of my all time favorites along with "What's The Deal With Arthur" which is only if you want to read. Cross between Arthur and Seinfeld... HaHa! Ane my "Arthur:Perspectives" is such and old one... Tbh I wrote it like 7 years ago as my first ever fanfiction but it got lost and I reposted it... I should rewrite it sometime. I have not been feeling very inspired and I often feel sad and lonely. I actually live in my car currently but I love myself and I think I am a good person... Anyways I wanted to give you a good review...

I like your story and it feels me with some emotion. I really hope Prunella finds a good love and although some things might cause issues, I hope it all works out and she gets the hugs and the kisses.

Oh and also please update... Like now...
ZoeyCares chapter 2 . 4/28
I'm glad this is a romance story. Make more ships... Sailing like Titanics in an ocean full of iceburgs... Only the best sailors lacking won't succumb to the trepidation
Namelikely chapter 1 . 4/11
It’s a good start. Really leaves ya wanting more! Can’t wait till the next chapter!
ZoeyCares chapter 1 . 4/6
Pretty lame trying to read someone's journal... I want to read more.