Ugh now a new player out for revenge again the team. I am guess someone close to Fuentes. Damn you Matt and the FBI. Because of you guys Danny and the team are going to be in harms way again.

Wow! That was an awesome story! I like the unanswered questions at the end because it means the story will go on. Will be looking forward to your sequel or any other stories you decide to write because I think you are a great storyteller and Hawaii Five 0 can continue through your stories. Thank you!

Steve just go to the appointment. Like Danny said if you don't like it try someone else. Talk to your friends. But don't keep it in side. You have to heal mentally/emotionally too. Hopefully you can see grace soon. I am sure that will help both of you.

Steve is awake and remembers everything that happened. He and Grace got to talk and see each other. Maybe if Steve's able to tell Danny some things about Johnston it'll stop his nightmares .

Good if Steve listen to anybody it seem like he will listen to the old woman. She got through to him.

Wow, no wonder Steve is so troubled, for him to have lived through the horrors he has seen and survived. I can’t imagine how he feels being the only survivor on an op besides his commanding officer. I’m glad he was able to talk it over with Danny, now the mental healing can begin.

At least Danny got a bit of an answer on Johnston. So the if there a next time Danny has more of an idea on what to say. And his feeling that something more being wrong with Steve he should go with it. weather its something wrong with Steve sick or emotional.

Great chapter! Steve has been through so much and seen so much, I don’t know how he can handle it so well. It’s good he has Danny and his Ohana for support. I don’t think Danny can relax until he finds what’s buffing Steve. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Glad Rod is back and nothing happened to him. Danny and your feeling about steve stay there then. its better if someone he knows is there when you have a feeling about Steve the trouble magnet.

Just when it’s getting good, the chapter ends! It’s a really good story and I look forward to the next chapter every time! So it looks like Steve is on the mend... but what’s up with Danny’s foreboding feelings? Great to see all Steve’s Ohana caring for him. I love that about Hawaii Five 0, the Ohana. I’d like to hear some of Steve’s background story from Roger Tillman. It was funny when Steve stated it was classified and then fell asleep. That was the end of that explanation.. hehe!

Good thing all Fuentes mean are dead. The team and Steve friends Rod did a good job. And Duke with his team found things. I wonder if Rod is going to help in some way maybe talk to Rachael so she doesn't take grace away. Or maybe something to do with Matty so he doesn't go to jail or at least not be in there for many years.

Grace got through to her dad and now they are on the way to get her and Steve. Wow what a fight you fought hard Steve and you got Fuentes he will never hurt anyone again. Now the team can get you to a hospital so you can rest and recover.

Another great chapter! So descriptive! I love your style, I can see and hear everything! Steve is such a badass and so strong, but how much more can he take? I hope Danny rescues him in time! I love how you had Steve and Grace with their secret of climbing the tree. Steve loves Grace like his own daughter and I love stories of them together. You left us with another cliffhanger! Yikes! I hope Steve is okay. Can’t wait for more! Thank you for your great story!

Ugh Fuentes had plans. But so did he team and Steve so glad. I hope the two shot were Fuentes trying to shot Steve and miss or Steve got him and maybe Steve's partner that he had Rod shot Fuentes. Steve has been shot/hurt more than enough since this whole Fuentes things started. He needs and the team need to catch a break. Now Grace needs to try again or maybe call Kono or Chin.

This story is amazing and the cliffhangers just kill me! I guess everything started at Steve’s house when he and Grace were first taken. Your story is so good with all the twists and turns it keeps me wanting to read more. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope Steve is okay and Grace can get ahold of Danny.