This seems more like a story board than a story. There is little to no characterization, no clear point of view, and no background. This seems like a good frame work for a story, it is just missing the majority of pieces.

I like this story

Gae Bolg hunts the "heart" Or the core of their existence since servants don't have "Hearts" just spiritual cores. Also Chu will be able to kill salem or at least make a permanent injury her.

about the A/N
I'm guessing you mean this?
"He nearly gave into his bloodlust against a bandit leader two years ago (and almost killed her)." -Chapter 1
Also, don't stress yourself out about it. Take your time

Aww too bad they weren’t bed buddies at some point. That would have been hilarious to see Qrow’s reaction.

I dont think Cu channels mana into anywhere its probably just natural strength I think your thinking of Shirou lol.

Other then that, excellent chapter and well done. Wish it was longer though.

Love the dynamic between cu and qrow

Don’t think I’ve said this yet, but I’m really enjoying this story. The end sequence on this chapter(chapter 5) was a little hazy to me. I was able to follow because general knowledge but when I first read it I thought Cu started off somewhere.

I'll make a full review of this when there's more chapters to read so I can get a good idea of where I stand.

For now I recommend that you should avoid going too fast with your story. The first 3 chapters have already sped up this story to a dangerous degree. Things like cuts and flash forwards can be damaging especially later on in the story if you wanted to show something important or cool but you're already too far forward. Stuff like that can cause excessive flashbacks and ruin your pacing.

Don't be afraid to take a breather and think what should be written in a chapter because sometimes a small part of your chapter can be a chapter of its own if given the proper care.

Other than that, I'll keep an eye on this story, definitely interesting.

Aww cute lettin Qrow sleep . Dunno why but I ship them .

Thank you for the chapter. I look forwards to more.

Ruby and Yang are going to call right as Qrow and Lancer confront Raven won't they?

Hmm I wonder why ozpin or the rest just doesn’t give him one. Ppl can get them without going to the academies if they are good enough and he’s done it longer than like ninety nine percent of The huntsmen in existence.

Haha lures a catgirl with fish .

Incoming Cu vs Raven I hope? Great chapter as always!

Still no mention of the fact that cu is the son of the god of light you would figure he would bring that up after hearing about the brothers