ohh i want to read more. great plot with a twist.

Love this!

Loved this! Thanks for sharing!

Oooh, I am so happy to have found you! I mainly use AO3 now, so I didn’t know there was a new great Dramione writer.

Original marriage law fic, I’m pleasantly surprised! I hope you write another one soon, a long one :D

Please let there be more...fabolous chapter.

For a second there, she was really giving me runaway Hermione yho!

Loved it! Great job

she like playgirl or something. ugh!

i am confusing about sebatian thing, it cruel of her and she like bi. i cant read anymore.

I liked it at first, but then suddenly there were too many plot twists, and then the story progressed in a flash and then they had sex and then the ending lacked? It would have been better if the story was lengthened then the transitions would’ve made enough sense. The gist was lovely but it could need some work.

That was so so so awesome. You really did capture everything into a one shot, excellent plot, detailed description and great characterizations

Sooooo... Please make this into a multi chapter fic. this is amazing (I'm not surprised) and I SO want to read about the development of their relationship. i hope one day you expand this!

I enjoyed thisit was fun to read a story where Hermione is believably in the wrong. Nice work!

What an intrresting take on a marriage law fic - love it!

Awwwww, such a sappy ending! I loved the last lines! So romantic!
Very nice OS!
Oh and Kingsley choosing Hermione for himself?! Whoa, didn’t see it coming! If you want to expand this, you should consider writing a prequel to this centered on Kingsley trying to woo Hermione and then, ultimately, proposing his devious plan.