I actually really like the OCs. I wonder what will happen now that they're here? And I love this story, its very intriguing to me!

pleeeeeeeeeease update

Can't judge OC from one chapter. If you can give them human flaws while (somehow) making them likable, we will enjoy them. Though I'm sure some people will absolutely hate OC, I'm just going to say that I like this so far. I wonder if you're going to do anything about Harry's greed, if you're going to have Harry set up a business or somehow find someway to profit off of the future horrors that is to come. For example: the sorcerer stone should be able to turn any metal into gold.

Longer chapters are nice, but with how fast you're uploading, the short chapters aren't a problem. I would just say whichever would do well for pacing and make sure you don't get burnt out too soon.

Awesomeness please continue

Why is it that all it took was brown hair and ponytail for my mind to immediately jump to Iruka? I swear I thought right away that Jay was Iruka reincarnated or something.

not a big OC person, but I like these two already. and batteries for a laptop...hmmm finally i love the idea of harry selling gallons on the black market and the goblins never finding out it is so brilliant.

OCs are fine it really just depends on how you incorporate them into the story for me. Keep up the good work!

OC’s are fine, perhaps even good for a fic as long as they aren’t just added just for the hell of it. Once again, thank you for making a chapter!

As long as the two OC’s are developed slowly throughout the whole story, I can tolerate them. And who knows, maybe they will grow on me later on.

Whether or not oc’s are needed or not is dependent on the source material, if a story is lacking in characters then using an oc to make up for it is fine, however Harry-Potter has a huge cast of unused characters in it, making the use of an oc grating, especially if you put them in the spotlight too much.

I like this story and can't wait for more. If you do keep the OC's, I recomend limiting them.I am personally not a fan of OC's because I find that they take over the whole story. Sometimes OC's are well done, but sometimes authors go overboard with using the OC and they become a Mary Sue. I hope this review doesn't offend you. I really enjoy this story and hope you continue with the awsome work your doing.

I like the OC's and i also like the fact u put harry in slytherin since he is the reincarnation of kakuzu and the working on/with magic instead of electricity laptop and other things.
Thanks for the update.

I like the OCs. I get the feeling the girl is muggleborn? That is going to be fun, if she continues interacting with Harry in an attempt to get more electronics to work in Hogwarts. The Slytherin’s reactions to working electronics would be fun too- they would be so confused.

correction. King Of The Snoms. that's my user name. also, i think you should keep the OC's. i mean if you delete this chapter then what would you like replace it with? also, why Asian/Chinese? do you have like someone you know who's Asian/Chinese? i mean why Asian/Chinese? i don't care! i don't care if you make Stephanie German! i don't care if you make her Italian! i don't care! just make another OC that's what? German? I don't care! just anything but Asian/Chinese. than that, this is an awesome fanfiction and i hope for you to make better chapters! ( pls say you like me or i will slap you with a piece of caik )

pls