Reviews for Not the King |
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LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 9/22 This is amusing! I really liked the sullen compromise at the end! |
Novirp13 chapter 1 . 4/25 He's still going to be a ghost king when he grow up LOL :'D |
kattythingz chapter 1 . 4/13 okay, I'll give you a brownie for this. I laughed left hard at this XD The image or dany being CHAINED to his throne. QUALITY CONTENT. |
Alexa Piper chapter 1 . 4/3 "Can I have one of the rooms in your palace" HAHAHA Oh my goodness, ghost prince. This is great. I love how you interpreted this prompt! And Danny will eventually end up as the king anyway so no wonder he's sulking. This was just too good. I also love how you used dialogue so well to keep the story flowing! |
Black Cat chapter 1 . 4/1 This had an undertone of a pyscho-drama or something, but it was so funny! "It's an office chair and a fancy hat"! Oh I love that! It sounds like Ken Jeoung when he's guessing a masked singer. Or me when I just can't let my little sis be right. XD Ah, good stuff. I also like how you offset Danny's denial with Dani's acceptance. It really balanced everything nicely. I'm going to insist my office chair is a throne from now on just to bug my sister. |
avearia chapter 1 . 4/2 This was hilarious, lol. Danny's reasons for not wanting to be considered as the Ghost King - both "what if it traps me" AND "hey I'm not even dead yet" - are sensible, yet the way he goes about it, ("not a crown! a hat." "Not a throne, an - office chair?") are increasingly ridiculous. I can see why the Observants are so distressed. And of course, Dani just wants to be royalty by relation, lol. Can't blame her. |
S1ink3r chapter 1 . 4/2 This was great, was laughing the whole time. |
Giraffacorn chapter 1 . 4/2 I love Dani interacting with the group so casually! Also, Ghost Prince is my new favorite title for Danny. |
Distant Radiance chapter 1 . 4/2 Hah, this was really cute. |
Dp-Marvel94 chapter 1 . 4/1 Ghost Princess Dani 3 3 3 |
ShadowPillow chapter 1 . 4/1 Haha, this is great. |
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 4/1 This was humorous, loved everything about this fic, you choose the words perfectly and I can't blame Danny for not wanting to be the Ghost King if indeed it comes with a price. As for Danielle? Well she technically got under Danny's skin but in the end was helpful, XD. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |