| Reviews for While The World Heals |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 7/20 Please update, this is my favorite reaction fic. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/5 Please update! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/27 Please update! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/12 Please update, this is my favorite reaction fic. |
 Dragongod54 chapter 4 . 6/8 This story is amazing I can't wait for more, But could you do Log Horizon Abridge, I think they could use some laughter or maybe some other abridged show |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/2 Please update! |
| Mr.Bougainvillea chapter 4 . 5/29 Bioshock infinite? But Jaune is not related to Elizabeth |
| Steelrain66 chapter 4 . 5/28 Well this was a interesting read and certainly your own take on this format. Can't wait for more really. Though a suggestion I would personally suggest the beginning of the first Captain America movie, as Jaune and Steve do have a lot of parallels. Leadership stuff of his in the avengers movies could be cool too. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/23 Please update |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/13 Please update |
| ThatGuyYouMet chapter 4 . 5/2 Suggestions of other multiverse settings: 1. Battlefield 2. John Wick 3. Konosuba 4. My Teen Romance Comedy SNAFU 5. Star Wars 6. Saga of Tanya The Evil. 7. Overlord 8. RE: Zero 9. Cautious Hero Can we please have a villain Jaune chapter? |
| Ruberforumfree chapter 1 . 4/30 What about Nier: Automata Universe? no one has done that before. |
| Fyr RedNight chapter 4 . 4/27 Interesting story. I really like your take on this genre, more exactly your plot, it's a nice change of pace. Looking forward for the next updates! |
| Austin chapter 4 . 4/19 Honestly nice story and all but I'm curious on something. Will you perhaps try of say Godzilla the animated series in which jaune can be nick tatopulos where he has zilla jr. Though technically godzilla imprinted on him through the yolk. Who the others on the G team could be are perhaps blake as monique due to the both of them ninja or spy like plus blake is based off of belle from beauty and the beast which is in france so yeah, plus their color scheme is purple and black. Sun can be randy as they both have a laid back personality along doing something cool such as sun with his martial arts and randy with his technowizz skills. Dr. Craven can perhaps be played by an o.c. son of Pietro polendia aka penny's father. Elsie can be perhaps be played by ruby most likely. As for audrey nick's girlfriend she can be Weiss or perhaps velvet because she is very determined to get an inside info of a scoop due to being a news reporter. Episode to start off with is ep one obviously. Also whitely schnee can make a very good Cameron winter obviously due to the hair color. Plus imagine if Neptune said this to ruby and yang. "Hey guys...I think jaune has you beat in terms of best pet." Which will naturally offend the sisters and corgi but seriously what can top of having a atomic breathing kaiju as a pet XD. Good luck on the next chapter and hope it comes soon. Also hope you stay safe from the coronavirus. |
| Stratos263 chapter 4 . 4/17 HopefulLy Neptune gets his shit kicked in. Good work on this story |
