| Reviews for Double Crossed |
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panther dragon chapter 10 . 7/3 I think this story is great, keep up the good work |
RustyPete12 chapter 10 . 6/27 A curious tale, to be sure. Can't wait to see how the Lion Guard and the Night Guard handle this mess! Please continue soon. |
tom chapter 7 . 5/28 wow good chapter cant wait for the next one |
Arika Koski chapter 6 . 5/17 Would this fanfic be rated R if it became a movie? |
tom chapter 6 . 5/12 nice |
Toothless34 chapter 6 . 5/12 This is getting really good. Please update soon. I wanna find out what happens next. |
tom chapter 5 . 5/10 nice i cant wait for what happens in the next chapter |
Andon chapter 5 . 5/10 Definitely enjoying the story so far, I just wish the chapters were a bit longer. The story seems to be moving a bit fast without much build up. To each there own, but in this chapter in particular I wish there would have been some insight as to why Kion was uneasy about the cubs. I know you plan on explaining it in the next chapter or so, but some hint would have peaked more interest. But your writing style is good and like I said, I am enjoying the story and looking forward to the next chapter! |
Arika Koski chapter 2 . 4/3 If this fanfic was a film would it be rated PG-13 or rated R? |
Toothmore chapter 2 . 4/2 Me gusta como esta iniciando la historia llena de intriga, la verdad me llama mucho la atencion, asi que espero el siguiente capitulo con muchas ganas |