I love it! Can't wait to see who this Ben kid is

I love it

Ah! Loved this chapter!

Lovely ending. I hope we get to see more Linstead family time.

I loved reading from you again! :)

I love it

I'm intrigued, I can't wait to read more.

I do missed your other stories and hope you can update those too. Let's hope inspiration strikes you every time to continue creating Linstead stories.

I really liked this! I like that it's the point of view of the kids. I can't wait to read more!

Happy too read that you are back! I have missed your stories and I'm sure this is going too be just as good. Please don't leave us haning for too long and will you be uppdating your other story about the halstead siblings? Much love 2 ya!

great start

It's interesting to read a story from the view point of a child of Erin and Jay. Can't wait to see where you go with this!

i need more

i love this

I'm not really suprised thst you chose to once again put the focus on a Linstead daughter. You just can't write anything else.

I really like the outcome of the first chapter though, because it seems like there will be more characters than just Lily. What I don't understand is why kids of a tv character always need to be "out of this world" smart? Lily is two years ahead and the smartest girl in her grade? Why? Can't she just have flaws like everybody else? She will excell on this math test anyway. Even though I think you are a good writer much of the stuff you write is very predictable and repetitive.

Well let's take a look what else you have in store. Interesting first chapter.