Extra Extra, read it and weep. It's this chapter's day of reckoning, spell-check time. Strap yourselves in, it's gonna be a bumpy ride.

-'with only the teacher's voice interrupting just barely the acquisition of true silence within that place.' / Move the word 'interrupting' to the left of 'barely'. / Ex: 'with only the teacher's voice just barely interrupting the acquisition of silence within that place.'

- ' not even too close to that kind of sensation' / remove 'too' from the sentence. / Ex: 'not even close to that kind of sensation'

- 'The Human Kingdom was once as fragmented as were the Keidran's tribes' / Move 'were' to the end of the fragment. / Ex: 'The Human Kingdom was once as fragmented as the Kiedran tribes' were'

- 'Nobody was truly aware of what made it possible for a unitary government to exist, nor how the warring states unified so suddenly and without much of a single document to certify the legitimacy of some diplomatic process.' / Alternate take. / Ex: 'Nobody was entirely aware what made it possible for a unitary government to exist, nor how the warring states were able to be unified so quickly, and without much evidence of a single document available to certify the legitimacy of the diplomatic process.'

- 'Edinmire was one particular case where Keidrans and humans coexisted peacefully, with many people preferring to keep warm relations with the Tiger Tribe that lived for centuries within the forests nearby the city.' / Split the sentence into 2. / Ex: Edinmire was one particular instance where Keidrans and humans were able to co-exist peacefully. Many of the people living there preferred to keep good elations with the Tiger Tribe that lived for many centuries in the forests near the city.'

- 'It was all out of the fact' / Replace 'out' with the word 'due'. / Ex: 'It was all due to the fact'

- 'And that was why there were advanced subjects that focused on Economics, in Social Studies, all for the sake of giving the edge for any new members to be able to join in to administer any of the towns under the Order's control.' / Split the sentence into 2. / Ex: 'That was why there were advanced subjects that focused on Economics and Social Studies. It was all for the sake of giving an edge to any new members to be able to join in to administer any of the towns under the Order's control.'

- 'I was slow with my leaving, ignoring the panicked expression taking over the mousy-looking companion that had been sitting near to me up until now' / Alternate take. / Ex: 'Slow in leaving class, I ignored the panicked expression overcoming the mouse-look companion that had been sitting near me during class.'

- 'I glanced to the side, expecting some trouble, but my eyes sported some surprise when I noticed that it was Mary.' / Alternate take. / Ex: 'Glancing to the side, I expected to find trouble. Imagine my surprise when instead of trouble, I found Mary.'

- 'I inquired genuinely confused by this unexpected interaction.' / Alternate take. / Ex: 'I inquired, genuinely confused by this unexpected interaction.'

- 'how genuinely good as a person he was back at school' / Alternate take. / Ex: 'How genuinely good of a person he was back in school'

- 'Pranks were a serious issue back then and it was easy to shift the blame of any disasters to a sudden and unexpected ordeal caused by some sickly-minded fool.' / Add a comma after the word 'then'.

- 'I asked two of the most important queries to get a proper understanding of what was going on in the nearby area and he nodded quickly.' / Alternate take. / Ex: 'I asked two of the more important queries in order to get a better understanding of what was happening in the nearby area. He nodded quickly at my question.'

- 'there is only a dragon that matches with that unique detail' / Alternate take. / Ex: 'There's only one dragon that has that unique description'

- 'Light-blue hairs aren't certainly something you can see on everyone.' / Alternate take. / 'Light-blue hair certainly isn't something you see anyone have normally.'

The ride is over, but the journey has merely begun. I fear for the narrator's safety if Nora has the same amount of energy as Nora in RWBY did.

Oh?
Now I want to learn want ties our good professor with our known dragon vixen Lady Nora herself.

I think this is a nice little story, I'm interested in seeing where it'll go c:

Today I bring good news and few spelling corrections. The good news is that you are making a lot less spelling mistakes. Get them while they're still fresh.

'It all happened without much of a notice for her.'/ Move words around. /Ex: 'To her, this all happened with little notice.'

'Albeit she was actually glad that she had been freed from the shackles of captivity by Lady Saria, it would be wrong to consider it a good reason to instantly like the young woman and this new current predicament for herself.'/ you don't use albiet at the beginning of a sentence, but somewhere in the middle. /Ex: 'Although she was glad to be freed from the shackles of captivity by Lady Saria, by no means did she consider it a good enough reason to instantly like the young woman, and the current situation she had found herself in.'

'It didn't matter how much genuine the brunette's smile was, no matter how incredibly at ease she looked around the Keidran while offering her some food and shelter.'/ Alternate take. /Ex: 'It didn't matter how genuine the brunette's smile was, nor how incredibly at ease she appeared to the Kiedran while offering her food and shelter.'

'For the young White Tiger's honest logic, this could have also been some trick to get her to once again fall into an unpleasant prison or maybe even a direct execution.'/ Alternate take. /Ex: 'In the mind of this young White Tiger, she considered this being to be some sort of trick to get her to either be thrown back into an unpleasant prison, or maybe a direct execution.

'You truly can't take much of a joke about this, can't you?' /Remove 'about this' from the sentence.

'I'm Professor at the Templar College here' / Add the word 'a' before 'Professor'.

There's a part in here that confuses me though. Around this part, "It was odd how from a very patient and kind woman, Saria slowly became… a giddy child at the novelty." I don't mean to alarm you, but it appears that one of your characters is in 2 different stories. Both this one and the DIO SI. Saria and Hannah seem so close in personality that one could be confused for thinking they are one and the same. Anyways, have a Good week!

Dude I love you!
This is a second fanfic that uses two kinds universe that I know of!
Do not stop writing this!
I beg you !
Just keep writing this story.