Great story! They are really made for each other...keeping files and journals on each other, that was really hilarious! The fight in the lift made me think of the fight scene in Bridget Jones, the first movie :D

I really liked the mood clouds and the funny bits with Ron. Well done on making the lift scene work too.

Very good

The description of Harry’s magical outburst in the first chapter is stunning, and every description that came after followed suit. Using Hufflepuff as an adjective is really cute, and I love that Ron’s number one priority is to not waste good booze.

Having read the summary, I really shouldn’t have held out hope for Jay, but the reality of what he did and why he did it is so much worse than I’d imagined.

The Malfoy file is a ridiculous and hilarious plot point, and I 100% agree with Ron’s assessment on it.

The fact that Harry still struggles with the Floo system even after so many years is amazing as is the fact that Ron is such a good friend, who knows Harry so well. I loved the way you wrote that Harry has the worst cloud anyone could possibly have and how it was immediately followed by an announcement telling everyone to think happy thoughts. Harry murderous thoughts in the lift and his less than efficient breathing exercises were brilliant as was the way he forgot how to count to three in the aftermath.

Harry’s assumption that after the war, with Voldemort gone, everything would be alright was really insightful, and his reaction to reality being far from it made me feel very very bad for him. The insight into his relationship with Dumbledore was also brilliant.

Harry and Draco both have stalkerish tendencies, so they were clearly made for each other, and the teasing without the insults was really quite cute. And you end the story with further evidence that Ron knows Harry very well but is nevertheless oblivious to certain details.

Your writing style is amazing; it flows seamlessly and is so very pleasant to read. And the creativity of the story—the mood clouds especially and those poor, but incompetent, maintenance workers—had me completely enraptured!

Harry, ur flats still destroyed... lol
Anyway, I really enjoyed this. The mood clouds was a nice touch.