I like it so far would love to see more

Imma be honest I don't expect the sex scene
But it was a welcome surprise

Hope that this story doesn't get abandoned like the others. I like it a lot

Continue please

Hi I'm back to read your chapter and the only thing I think should be changed is Yue's attitude towards Hajime. Even if ur going away from the anime/manga i think it would be natural for Yue to be attracted towards Hajime. Just a suggestion and thank you so much for continuing this story!

It's fantastic, please continue.

Was hoping for a lemon..

I'm sorry I still could not let go of my concern of Yue's feelings. I know that she is very bold when it comes to Hajime but I still don't understand her intentions. Is she gonna become Hajime lover too or not?

Another great chapter looking forward to more

This story is good however the way you write is still confusing to me.
But rest assured that I will continue to read this story until it's completion.
That being said I can't wait to see what you do for the next Arc.
Please continue to write and have a nice day.

Nice chapter , hope that you will continue to write more in the future.
Will Shia able to join them or to be train by both Yue and shizuku in order to protect her Homeland with her people?
As for myuu then I hope that both shizuku and hajime will just be big brother and sister character instead of hajime being papa.

i'm very very very happy

I’m liking the buildup. Plus I like the comical moments from Yue.

good job

This story shows promise. Can’t wait to see the next chapter, but take your time.