The boys are going further down the rabbit hole, having to be hardened by the harsh lessons they're learning from Allen. They may end up becoming even worse monsters than Huggin by the time they finally avenge their parents' deaths..

The Rotten Dogs is the name of the gang that the brothers joined up with, right?

That was awesome! Especially with Lemy and his insults.

Rather surprised at first that the boys joined a gang, but it makes sense for them to get a better understanding of how things work there so they can actually pull off a plan to avenge their parents' murders.

Please if you do give Lyle a girlfriend, make it any girl but Gloom. Glyle is a beaten dead horse.

If you ever decide To give Lemy, Lyle, and Bobby girlfriends, may I suggest Lupa for Lemy, Gwen for Bobby, and as for Lyle, I want to say Gloom but I think something new should be done like Marla or maybe even Lois.

In complete fairness here, you're doing something entirely unique with the Fantasyverse, and I already love it a lot for that exact reason. I eagerly await how the boys will eventually move past this horrid tragedy.

This is darker I've read and it is potential to be a masterpiece!

Hope for more.

This is only the first chapter, but already I can tell it's a masterpiece! Even if it would end up nowhere near 400,000 words.

Of all the Loud Louse fanfiction writers, in my opinion, you're in the top three.

Oh my god something fantasyverse related that isn't about Lyle, Gloom and Marla. God forbid somebody writes something that isn't about those three.