Another wonderful chapter! I enjoyed the character interactions and scheming that occurred in this one. The challenge was a classic puzzle so it makes sense that it would be rather concise, no complaints here since it just gave you more time to focus on character development which is always good! It's nice to see the inner workings of the alliances and I like the small bits of interactions we get to see between Chef and Chris. It was well worth the wait and I'm excited to see what comes next! Also, don't worry about the upload schedule, there's no need to feel rushed or pressured to release a chapter you're not content with!

I like this chapter Katlyn was fine curious to see how Samantha will feel about that elimination. Antelopes forming deals not alliances the race with challenges is definitely like survivor. Just no puzzle yet at least the cool kids alliance seems dead
good chapter

Nice, this story is back!

Pretty great chapter, really well worth the wait, even tho the challenge was short, the focus on the character developement compensates really well

I'm still loving what you're doing with my girl Liz, and speaking of her, nice to see her getting the team on her back and winning the challenge for them

This elimination was a little bit of a twist, the 'cool kids alliance' is going to be smaller now so the lower half of the chipmunks are going to have a little bit more of power (also, I wonder how Samantha will react after hearing that her brother was eliminated)

As I said, pretty great chapter, i'll be waiting eagerly for the next one

Whew, I thought my OC was a goner. Good chapter.

This was actually pretty cool! I love it! WELL worth the wait!

Don't worry about rushing take your time. I always prefer quality over quantity

Many thanks for the update! I'm sorry to hear that your laptop was damaged. Glad to see that you're pushing forward with the story though, I'm excited to see what comes next!

I’m glad that Froy is easing into his team more and making friends, and him shoehorning a horror reference was spot on.

We love a good Brunch Of Disgustingness challenge. Marshall baiting Audrey is literally everything I hate in a person. That said, I’m not surprised she went home because she lost the challenge for them. At least she sorta got together with Nick at the end!

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~Always and forever, COTB~

Love this chapter Katlyn is great
Audrey is gone
Food challenge was disgusting Grub smoothie I think was the worst one
And Audrey slapping Marshall was the highlight of the episode awesome chapter.

Pretty intriguing chapter. Gives a glimpse into more of the dynamics of the Antelopes, as well as solidifies those set with the Chipmunks last chapter. The challenge for this chapter was pretty straightforward so I get there isn’t much need to say what each pair eats, especially for this many cast members. Overall, I quite enjoyed it! I can’t wait to see where you take the story.

Nice chapter, the drama was interesting between the players.

You write well Marshal (exept, he has only one L in his name), he's a jerk, who hates the animals and the nature but he's smart and exploits others.

Taylor is great too but she hasn't too much act, but i seems she and Elizabeth became friends and with time, maybe even more. She was lucky that she didn't has to eat any dairy product.

Audrey's a nice girl, she doesn't deserved to eliminated so soon but this gam isn't about what's fair.

Great chapter, sad to see the Antelopes losing, but at least my girl Liz was safe from the elimination
I knew that a food related challenge would come sooner or later, but I didn't expected it to come this soon

Seeing Audrey go was sad, but expected, after seeing that she's a vegetarian, I knew that she was gonna have a hard time with a challenge like this

Like I said, great chapter, keep it up!

Sorry for not reviewing the previous chapter, but both of them are good. I gotta say, Marshall is starting become my favorite character. He looks like he starting to become a better version of Heather or Alejandro.

I am hoping to see more of Sabine though, but I'm not holding it against you. You do have 17 other characters to write with.

Keep up the good work.

When it says you’ve already reviewed chapter 4... yeah we love this for ourselves

That entire sequence in between the challenge and elimination gave me Big Brother vibes, loved it. Also love the callback to Pahkitew Island with the challenge, I think Matt needed to be put in his place.

Pretty anxious about how eliminations will go if they’re already this active and tense! Seems like everyone’s hungry for the win!

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~Always and forever, COTB~

Pretty good episode, I really liked the challenge, it was nice to see my team winning the first challenge

I wasn't expecting an Idol to be found this soon, let's see how it turns out

I really liked the elimination questions, it reminded me a lot to Survivor

The elimination could've gone either way, so seeing Max going wasn't that much of a shock

Really good episode, keep it up