Now that this story is finished, I just wanted to thank everyone for following this story, commenting along the way. Your replies kept it fun, and I hope you enjoyed the story.

I am working on a follow up to this that I should have published by year's end.

Beautiful story. Hope to see more of your work eventually!

And here, we come to an end to High Turnover.

What a ride I have to say! I got to say, I'm surprised that Jen came back and she is actually Henry's brother. I thought that Mike would return, but I guess that we will not see him again.

I wonder if William will become Springtrap soon.

For now, I pray that you are safe from the COVID-19 and I wish you luck with whatever you're going to do in the future. I wonder if there will be a sequel to this!

Until now, keep on rocking.
- Cheah

Yeah! That's what you get, William!
I wonder how things will conclude from here. Either in this story, it all ends there or it continues.

That monster William...dear god. There's going to be a long string of flashbacks here.

Let's see if Jeremy will survive the night.

So that was why Golden Freddy was yelling 'It's me! I'm right here...it's me!"
I wonder if anyone will finally find out about the missing children and if Cassidy's parents come to her.

I've honestly gotten really attached to mike, I hope the story doesn't just move onto a new character without bothering to mention him anymore.. It'd be pretty cool to have a story from two perspectives, with mike and this 'mr anderson' being those perspectives. Of course... Mr Anderson might not be who he says he is... Could mike be sneaking back in under a false identity? I'm really excited for the next update.

Ah...I thought that Mike might be able to save the children, but nope! Like the game, he got fired and the restaurant management has been pretty nasty to him. I hope that he can recover from his injuries and experience.

Is this the final chapter for the story or is there more? I wonder who is this 'Mr Anderson'.

Hey buddy, I'm pretty desperate here, so I'm writing this from my 3ds. Your story, is, well, pretty freaking awesome, to say the least. So, from fan to creator here, PLEASE continue this. Thanks.
Signed,
Mark L. Alcove

Didn't have the time to sit down and comment, but now I have the time to comment about this story.

Find another story by an Australian author like me. Sweet!

You did a pretty good job explaining Mike's experience at being in Freddy's. You described well of how the animatronics move and Mike noting down certain aspects of this. When the power shut down, I was surprised that both Bonnie and Chica got close to Mike at times!

Also, I thought that Mike would listen to Phone Guy's recordings, but Fritz took over. I wonder if Mike know if any night guards were killed at the restaurant.

I wonder if Mike would know about the dark secrets of Freddy's and it begins with the springlock suit instructions.

I can't wait to see the next chapter!
- Cheah

Hello, hello! I saw your story from Reddit and thought to give it a read :)

First of all, the SPaG of the first two chapters so far are near perfect, with just some missing punctuation here and there. Your description of the diner itself, and of Mike’s emotions during the whole experience, is also pretty on point. My only nitpick is that a lot of the paragraphs are very chunky, which makes it a bit tedious to read. They could probably benefit from being split, but like I said, it doesn’t affect the story experience too much for me. So keep it up! I’ll be leaving another review soon, so see you then! :)

Nice! Sorry about my critic in my last post.

It’s spelled paycheck

Yes! Mission complete! Now all he has to do is never go near there again.

Well ya met Goldie Lad, how's it feel ta beh ter'ied? (my best foxy impression)