This was a blast to re-read. Thanks!

Sigh. The rock I've been hiding under is calling my name. Thanks for the brief reprieve. Hope you stay well and I'll hop over to FP to check your other story.

Grateful you're not done writing after all! Love the excuse to read this again, and thanks for inspiring me to get back to my own writing.

Heh, you *do* realize you just doomed yourself to another 72 chapters of rewrites, yes?

Good work anyway D

Cut that short compared to the original. Planning on expanding on that next section?

Had to bring up both versions and go down them side by side. Tali's add in about Shepard joking about his own death, which led back to the explanation. That worked well.

Good work! An excellent end to an even better series. Keep up the good work!

Went like a boss :)

There's a couple of words missing from the first two paragraphs. *'by' its shoulder* and *disappeared in a white (something) by the blast*.

Love the re-read.

Legion, you magnificient tin can :)

Hah. I forgot about 'playing dead'. Glad this gave me the opportunity to re-read :)

Love your work, loved Dancers in the Dark, and love this! Keep it up ElectricZ :)

More chapters to read during the virus apocalypse. :)

Wait, where's the head crabs? Oh, headcannon. :)

I definitely up for a re-read.

I’ve gone back and re-read the original TD twice since you initially published it a few years back, so it goes without saying I’m thrilled that you’ve decided to do a remaster of your original work.

It’s terrific to come across a writer such as yourself who not only finishes their publications, something that’s a rarity on this website, but also one who hasn’t lost their enthusiasm to write about the game they love 10 years later.

Keep up the fantastic work!