Reviews for Out of this World
Guest chapter 5 . 6h
Hope new chapter come soon.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/20
This chapter was really well written! Can I make a request for Jaune and the Lands of Termina? That would be awesome!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/20
Holy shit this chapter is cute and funny
Digifan303 chapter 5 . 10/9
Please do Pineapple from imyoshi and Ocean from imyoshi too please
Ak-Jaidyn chapter 3 . 10/8
You Could Also Do Professor Arc 2:Headmaster Arc and show the fight with Adam Hell in Canon arkos barely makes any sense and was honestly kind of shallow, she liked him because he didn't know who she was.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/1
PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON
PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16
can you have them react to at least to the last two chapters of Stress Relief by Coeur Al'Aran.
Random Gust chapter 5 . 8/25
Please please please please please please pleeeeeeeeeeeease update this! It been too long:
Borgelious chapter 5 . 8/7
I don't know why people like ascendancy, it's way dark and to be honest boring as all fuck. Probs gonna skip until it's something else
Reiki27 chapter 5 . 8/3
Greetings!
Personal preference of White Knight (Jaune x Weiss), but since the story is at Enabler Knight (?)(Jaune x Ruby x Yang) i currently do not think that including Pyrrha in their relationship is good, since kissing someone's boyfriend/girlfriend/SO in front of them is kind-a a dickmove and i expected . And for some reason that I don't know I dislike Arkos (Jaune x Pyrrha).
However dear Author, if you wish to include Pyrrha, then please go all the way by forming Rainbow Knight (Jaune x Team RWBY x Pyrrha).
Personally I like and request reaction Novels about Jaune when he isn't present in the theather, only in the screen, making him oblivious at the fact that the girls are developing feelings, or losing feelings, towards him, for example IntoTheArcHive where the girls start to see him as a potential interest, and, i think ChronicleTheatherFeatJaune where Velvet choose to give up Jaune and pursue/accept Yatsuhashi. in your case I would put Jaune in a 'trainning realm' where he would be not present at the movies, but you could make him learn attacks and powers of what the audience is watching, for example, they see an alternative future based on fullmetalachemist where Jaune marry Weiss (FrostMoon shipper, remember) and uses Dust magic to simulate alchemy and burn immortal grimm by snapping his fingers and creating fire, a la Roy Mustang VS Envy.
This will result in Jaune recieving some of the expetiences of his alternate self, and, as the show continues, Jaune will show gradual improvement, from 7 Beowulves to 17, to individual members of team RWBY to everyone in the roomas long you desire to make him OP.
Thanks for the novel, and good writting
Darkstormdragon chapter 1 . 7/31
Was really hoping you would continue this.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/23
Update please
Guest chapter 5 . 6/28
Fuck Pyrrha and fuck Arkos.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/28
This is kinda a boring as shit universe.
NineYetis chapter 4 . 6/24
I just realized, The Games we Play would be a good book to look over for this book. It's over a million words so if you haven't read it it would probably be best to wait on that. Its pretty good and latter chapters dive into the nature of the soul the grim and reincarnation. Earlier on you have Jaune recruited by the WF and help steel a bullhead from the SDC while traumatizing Weise.
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