Dxd vibes

excellent chapter I hope with and the next one is just as good, I also like the fact that Jaune's maximum strength is still a mystery but I hope and be like Shirohige

I always liked stories where Jaune does not look like his original personality. In your story, he is obviously a good fighter and obviously knows the psychology of women to create a real harem ... although if he has such behavior in the future, then this is problematic. Is it possible to see a list of girls for a relationship?

“ talking”
‘Thoughts’
All in all not bad the only is true to constantly use ruby said or though “followed by “whatever they say”
Or “what ever they says” ruby state’s or though makes it easier to follow dialogue.

add neo to the harem please and thats all i ask XD

Y tenemos a Issei Hyodo en Jaune Arc. Seguira el canon o tendra mas DxD

I'm eager and hopeful for a delightful rwby harem story. Good luck and keep up the good work

fantastic work, I love it, I look forward to the next chapter

I have seen much worse from people whose first language is English. I like this story, but just a small request. Please, allow Jaune to be able to fight, at least to Ren's level. Good luck :D

Somewhere I saw you. The text is very similar to something from another site.
Ты часом не тот самый автор с России?

What is your first language? If it's Spanish, I can help you