Ouch...it's unreadable. Where's the spacing? Also, the formatting seems more like a script than a novel. The actual contents may be good, but if you can't be read, then what's the point?

Good fic so far but you do realize that the only reason your fic is not more popular is because the way your format your chapters right? The lack of spacing, the less than a thousand words, etc...

It seems a nice story but could you space out the paragraphs a bit more please

i'm kinda guessing it's trap and i really want to see if im right or not

An enjoyable read

YOU FELL FOR IT FOOL

The Thunder Cross Split Attack! No fighter has escaped it!

I'm really, really glad that this Dio is still a villain.

Thank you for the chapters
Keep em coming please.

This is a really great story,keep it up man.A few grammar mistakes are here and there but regardless it's wish the chapters were longer and in paragraphs.

If you want a suggestion on how Dio could make a loyal army (if you haven’t already thought of this) he could offer stands to quirkless people. Most quirkless are likely treated horribly just like Izuku was and do probably not have his selfless personality so the likelihood they would swear loyalty to a man capable of giving them power is very likely.

Mmmmm good shit

damn.

The World requiem?

I like the fact that DIO respects Stain.