| Reviews for FateGrand Order New Order |
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   EmperorGhoul chapter 34 . 6/20 I can have a opinion. So if you don't like that opinion dont read it. |
| CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 46 . 5/29 I’m really liking this story and sad that it will end soon. |
| ChimaTigon chapter 37 . 5/29 Gudako? |
| UnconsciousFake chapter 46 . 5/28 Thanks for the chapter! Anyway i got relieved when you said you are not going to stop this so you can rewrite it. |
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 5/28 Terrible first chapter. Too much angst for a very unwanted son. Your Harry is extremely pathetic to damage his core beyond repair for a simple case of accidental magic. |
| Azhure Raven chapter 46 . 5/28 Also, I prefer reading shorter paragraphs. I tend to want to skip an entire paragraph if it's too long. |
| Azhure Raven chapter 46 . 5/28 Thank you for finishing this fic before rewriting it. If I may, when you're writing the new one, only one person's dialogue can be in a paragraph. If you're switching to the next person's dialogue, then put it in the next paragraph. Doesn't matter if he/she says literally one word before the next person. One character dialogue per paragraph. |
| Cookies chapter 46 . 5/28 Thanks for deciding to continue and finish before rewriting! |
| ProfesorGoblitz chapter 45 . 5/28 I would like to try |
| zero fullbuster chapter 46 . 5/28 love it. are you going to update Helena Potter's Journey and The 34th Knight after you finish this story? I can't wait what happens next. |
| nixsans01 chapter 46 . 5/28 The final battle is going to be awesome. Can’t wait to see how Moldy-ass can take on the full force of the REAL Beasts. Keep up the good work! |
| god of all chapter 46 . 5/28 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| zero fullbuster chapter 45 . 5/28 Love the story. Please don't give up on it. I can't wait what happens next. |
| AzureNight1994 chapter 45 . 5/28 Honestly it's not bad but you went to far too many extremes to make people unlikable, and made things go a bit too fast. honestly with a grail you could make it so that Salazar it the big bad who has unseated voldemort who could be trying to get his place as darklord back, with dumbledoor being a somewhat machiavellian schemer who has good intentions who comes to realise that he allowed himself to become too prideful and secretive. Charles could be insecure and trying to live up to his title as such comes across as arrogant and reckless but comes to realise that he doesn't want to be a hero or that heroes don't tend to live good and easy lives. the order could all types people who like power, idealists, etc |
| dmas91 chapter 45 . 5/28 I was kind of interested in the story, if you really gonna rewrite it could you at least say when so i can expect it |
